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 dateguy23

Joined: 6/26/2009
Msg: 1
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Posted: 7/10/2009 1:52:31 PM
I have been on pof for a little while, and I suspect my profile could use a little work. I was wondering what I could do to make my profile stand out a little more. I've tweaked it here and there, but I'm running out of ideas. Is it the pictures, the wording, or what's going on? Thanks for any help!!
 Sun_Devil_92

Joined: 11/16/2008
Msg: 2
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Posted: 7/10/2009 1:59:17 PM
This is what I would do with your profile:


I'm a professional, established man looking for someone who's easy to talk to and fun to be with. I enjoy someone who has a great sense of humor, but also someone with whom I can have an interesting conversation. Sweetness also goes a long way with me. I've been told that I'm very easy to talk to, and I think communication and honesty are the most important parts of any serious relationship.

I can go out and get wild and crazy, but I also can be relaxed and enjoy simply hanging out with someone special, sharing our dreams, goals, and thoughts. I never owned or rode a motorcycle until I was 34. Now I own one and ride often.


Then, in a paragraph lists the qualities that you are looking for in a woman. Don't only include the superficial ones - include emotionally what you are looking for in a relationship. What are the things that a woman does that drive you crazy with passion and makes it so you just can't live without her.

And make your profile picture the one on the right.

The best of luck to you.
 chanel1961

Joined: 6/22/2009
Msg: 3
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Posted: 7/10/2009 3:26:23 PM
Your pictures are not good!
 Sun_Devil_92

Joined: 11/16/2008
Msg: 4
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Posted: 7/10/2009 3:29:54 PM
Frankly, I agree with Chanel. Do you have any others?
 cyberlovemuse

Joined: 6/7/2009
Msg: 5
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Posted: 7/10/2009 3:59:02 PM
the pics are a definite a no-go.

1. never take your own pic - it looks like you have no friends to help you out in that department. (i'm guessing you were holding the camera at arm's length in the first one).

2. believe it or not, women look at backgrounds. if you have a bike, post a pic with yourself on it, another when you're out having fun, one where you're at home relaxing and shows you have some comfortable taste or nice decor (if indeed that is the case), or one where you're on vacation. variety is good.

women want to see that you have a life, you're not afraid to show it, and are willing to share it.

good luck :)
 dateguy23

Joined: 6/26/2009
Msg: 6
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Posted: 7/10/2009 4:29:18 PM
Thank you very much for all of your advice. I suspected my pictures needed help...I really appreciate the tips!

Shawn
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