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 Scryer41

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The Kiss
Posted: 7/11/2009 9:34:27 PM
THE KISS
05/12/09



The kiss was long
The kiss was sweet
The kiss of two lovers
Who were destined to meet.


The kiss was refreshing
The kiss was so deep
They could feel it from
Their heads to their feet.


The kiss went on
The kiss was eternal
The kiss would make them
Burn like an inferno.


The kiss was not fleshly
The kiss went more deep
Than two lips touching
And hearts that skip beats.


The kiss is two souls
The kiss is the bond
The kiss is what they wanted
The kiss which they longed.
 Lady2113

Joined: 10/28/2008
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Posted: 9/16/2009 11:59:22 AM
Fantasticly written! Straight to the point but leaves you thinking about it and all goosebumpy! I love this! Thank you for sharing it!
 Scryer41

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The Kiss
Posted: 10/11/2009 9:29:03 PM
You're welcome. Nice to see it was at least read once! :)
 bellaNotte1

Joined: 9/29/2009
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The Kiss
Posted: 10/17/2009 6:12:07 AM
very nice!!!!


Nicely written!
 Scryer41

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Posted: 10/21/2009 9:40:31 PM
Thank you Bella. I think I've heard from you before. Thanks for the imput.
 blueglove

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Posted: 10/24/2009 7:28:27 AM
I enjoyed reading this too - refreshingly different and referring to soul rather than body connection.
 haildestroyer

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The Kiss
Posted: 10/24/2009 6:03:43 PM
It's that pivotal moment
It's impossible
this kiss this kiss (unstoppable)!
This kiss this kiss!
 sunshineworld

Joined: 6/17/2008
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Posted: 11/3/2009 3:06:01 PM
This brought nice feelings to my soul! Thanks so much!!!!!!!!
 Scryer41

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Posted: 11/6/2009 9:04:53 AM
Thank you all for your comments. :)
 Constance_

Joined: 10/30/2009
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The Kiss
Posted: 11/6/2009 7:52:42 PM
kiss
my lips
my darling
my ruby red lips
kiss
 Scryer41

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Posted: 11/7/2009 10:39:42 AM
That was short and sweet, Constance!
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