| The Kiss Posted: 7/11/2009 9:34:27 PM | THE KISS 05/12/09
The kiss was long The kiss was sweet The kiss of two lovers Who were destined to meet.
The kiss was refreshing The kiss was so deep They could feel it from Their heads to their feet.
The kiss went on The kiss was eternal The kiss would make them Burn like an inferno.
The kiss was not fleshly The kiss went more deep Than two lips touching And hearts that skip beats.
The kiss is two souls The kiss is the bond The kiss is what they wanted The kiss which they longed. | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 9/16/2009 11:59:22 AM | Fantasticly written! Straight to the point but leaves you thinking about it and all goosebumpy! I love this! Thank you for sharing it! | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 10/11/2009 9:29:03 PM | | You're welcome. Nice to see it was at least read once! :) | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 10/17/2009 6:12:07 AM | very nice!!!!
Nicely written! | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 10/21/2009 9:40:31 PM | | Thank you Bella. I think I've heard from you before. Thanks for the imput. | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 10/24/2009 7:28:27 AM | | I enjoyed reading this too - refreshingly different and referring to soul rather than body connection. | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 10/24/2009 6:03:43 PM | It's that pivotal moment It's impossible this kiss this kiss (unstoppable)! This kiss this kiss! | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 11/3/2009 3:06:01 PM | This brought nice feelings to my soul! Thanks so much!!!!!!!!  | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 11/6/2009 9:04:53 AM | | Thank you all for your comments. :) | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 11/6/2009 7:52:42 PM | kiss my lips my darling my ruby red lips kiss | |
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| The Kiss Posted: 11/7/2009 10:39:42 AM | | That was short and sweet, Constance! | |
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