Your interests section is quite lacking. You put the effort to list one item, but that single item in itself isn't helpful whatsoever. I'd suggest either listing actual things, or leaving it blank.
"sports (yes I do like them!)"
The parenthesis makes it look like you're desperately trying to convince people. This shouldn't be necessary.
"If you contact me (or I contact you) and we want to get to know each other I'm going to want to have a few conversations online before meeting in person. If the chemistry is there then a few can truly mean 2 or 3. This isn't one of those weird circumstances where "a few" translates into 3 months of emailing or online chatting. The point is to meet in person if we both want to. Thanks for playing! :)"
This whole paragraph seems off. Some of it gives off the vibe "I'll do this if you choose me", which comes off as bargaining to me. It might just be me though.
In terms of the 2-3 month thing, I'd personally have that be something I tell people through a message, should they request to meet right away. Not something in the profile itself.
The comment on playing implies that you view this as a game. This isn't necessarily "wrong", per se, but make sure this is the message you want to get across, as the implication of such helps define the persona you're trying to depict.
In terms of grammar, a few commas are missing here and there, which make it a little weird to read the first time around.
It could do with a little more information about you. | 
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