| Looking for Feedback Posted: 7/26/2009 12:56:21 PM | I'm looking for feedback on my profile. It's hard to know how others will perceive a profile so some feedback would be helpful. Obviously, it's impossible to capture who we are on a webpage. So profiles are really just advertisements for who we are. And we focus group advertisements so why not profiles? Anyway, all assistance is greatly appreciated!
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| Looking for Feedback Posted: 7/26/2009 1:04:46 PM | | You have a great smile......I see you wrote all about the things that you like to do....how about writing about what good qualities you are looking for in a woman......and then you are off to a great start...good luck.... | |
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| Looking for Feedback Posted: 7/26/2009 1:09:22 PM | | You do have a great smile.. and a picture of a skiing gorilla... how in the world are you still single? :) | |
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| Looking for Feedback Posted: 7/27/2009 6:43:51 PM | | My main critisism would be your opening line. It seems a little superfluous to me. I would think of somethign else for the first line. | |
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