| to my future
Posted: 7/30/2009 12:57:17 PM | Attraction doesn't quite describe it. Like why I see you before realizing
I have yet to open my eyelids.
Its childish, I'm so shook if i try to open up to you
You could measure the spray by mileage.
Lust is too shallow for what'll happen here
Its not the reason I'm fiendin just to breathe in
Your atmosphere.
In fact it's fear that is love's opposite
But our embrace will chase that away
And make me feel brave, on top of it
Convenience definitely isn't the reason,
Shit, I'd be freezin, walking 10 miles
With a smile
Just to keep you warm in the evening.
I'll hold you till the Zzz's hit and while you're sleepin
I'll tell you secrets
About how i pray to be the subject of your dreamin
Loneliness doesn't do this need justice
I've been single for a year and a half and love it
Cant get enough of it.
But i haven't been this tied up
Since i took my ex's puppet string and cut it.
Now you've tied my heartstring in a knot, and plucked it.
I'll act selfless, offer my hoodie against the weather
But I'm selfish, I just want your scent on my sweater.
I'll do one better
I'll use the letters of your name to spell Love,
And that's what i'll bring you.
I wanna tell you how stunning you are every day
From the moment I seen you
And I wanna tell you how you made me believe in love at first sight
I just have to meet you.
Wherever you are.
(btw, i know it's a rough draft and there are some tense and grammar issues, but i just wanted to get an initial reaction to it before the tedious editing, enjoy!) | |
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| to my future
Posted: 8/1/2009 11:13:21 AM | | Sounds pretty good the way it is. I'm sure a bit of editing will just make it better, but I for one wouldn't mind reading the full draft. | |
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| to my future
Posted: 8/1/2009 2:34:00 PM | Very well done. Nice imagery.
Yeah. | |
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| to my future
Posted: 8/9/2009 11:08:12 AM | | Love it. Made me shiver. Please don't over-edit, but what do I know?? | |
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| to my future
Posted: 10/27/2009 11:42:50 AM | Look up to the stars and see that they burn brighter than the sky
true to the stars whisper words of time that passes by
Under my feet i keep walking as far as i can go
keep moving with the moon that bears upon me
gently with the flow
time passes by and now i think
of what can be
not just alone in silence i whisper
for my feet to return home
with empty arms still wandering
along winding streets i roam
i keep searching for what seems years
of someone just to walk with me along
this winding road to share my endless tears
to share these arms with me
untill we both grow old
still burning above so full and bright a star
that falls before me
silence from a burning spark
just trying to find its way from the dark | |
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