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 macman783118

Joined: 4/4/2008
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Posted: 8/7/2009 11:40:37 AM
Hi,Can my profile be improved? I have worked hard on my profile and would love to have it critqed by anyone male or female ,but especially female. Ladies is there something ive put in that is a immediate turn off? Do i need to add more or less of a description. Are my pictures places where you can see them. I'm trying to meet new women and either be friends or date just whatever happenes .so any form or suggestions would be wonderfull. I really am a nice guy and dont be afraid to be blunt about it . Thanks!
 builderforfun

Joined: 5/13/2009
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Posted: 8/7/2009 11:54:21 AM
Yes just review mine lol.
 Annielikeslyrics

Joined: 3/5/2009
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Posted: 8/7/2009 12:13:23 PM
Alas, it can be improved by fixing your spelling and grammar errors. Just sayin'.
 Sublime_One

Joined: 6/27/2009
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Posted: 8/7/2009 2:27:46 PM
The following statement is not necessary unless you’re looking for a groupie or someone who is easily impressed. Save this for actual communication. Otherwise it sounds like bragging or name-dropping.

I am blessed to have the opportunity to make great money doing one of the things I love most in my life: being a studio musician, playing for labels and producers on records.And currently playing bass for the Dixie Chicks.



I would remove this all together. It sounds controlling.

Some things I'd love to do but would want a sweet girl to go with me to do are.

Gondela rides "Right here in Addison"
Indoor Scuba Diving
Pocket Sandwich Theater "Think whos line is it anyway,meets SNL"
Studio Grills
Comedy Clubs


This statement sounds obsessive.

That special someone that I think about all day until it hurts so much that I have to see her.



I would trim your profile down to this:

I'm not shy and am very confident, but generally I like to observe a situation before leaping in. I am a man that walks with respect and integrity. I take pride in making people laugh, and I can turn your frown upside down. I can be a cut-up and make light of a situation yet, when needed, be very level headed and serious. I’ve never been called boring. I'm a hopeless romantic and in this day and age I am told this is rare.

I seek someone that is sweet, caring and outgoing. I like a woman that has the energy for a night out on the town, or just staying in to watch movies. I love good conversation with honesty and openness. It’s important that I get to know you first because I know a lover should be a friend first and foremost.

Hope to hear from you soon.
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