| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 11:39:45 AM | | Hey! Been on POF for about a month or so. I enjoy it, but I haven't had any dates (which is the main reason why I'm on here). Is there anything I need to improve on my profile. I tried my hardest to be honest and as descriptive as possible. Any advice would help. Thank you!! | |
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| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 11:50:02 AM | You have a very well put together profile and you are attractive. If you were a bit closer I would definitely ask you out.
That being said, you might want to fix a few grammatical errors and not type in text talk at certain points. People that are serious at dating don't like hearing Holla as a customary greeting. Also putting only a few sentences per paragraph would make for easier reading. GL QT.
Tye | |
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| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 12:11:05 PM | Your photos are super cute. Your content is descriptive and engaging. I think you have a fantastic profile.
There's just one thing that sticks out like a sore thumb to me. It could be because of demographics. I'm from the east coast and may not understand this. Your profession, as a semi-professional goat rancher, may be what's turning the guys off.
If I were you, I'd change it to 'Student', or 'Other'. During actual communication, you can explain what you do.
BTW... do you make goats milk soap on the farm? | |
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| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 12:49:34 PM | | Hey don't feel bad I been on here for about a year now and I am lucky if I talked to two or three ladies on here not sure what it is in my profile but not many interested,get lots viewing me but that is it not many emails | |
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| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 1:36:43 PM | Hmmm soo ur a semi-pro goat rancher? I would maybe date a professional goat rancher but never a semi-pro loser! Maybe u should try to move up in the goating industry or just lie..
You also say, "I want...." way tooo much in ur profile.. You know what I want? I want u to stop that before I throw up..
You may wanna change one of ur pics on ur profile; you and ur friend look like dogs....
Best of luck to you,
Taco | |
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| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 2:36:25 PM | break up the two large paragraphs you have going. Keep each at a max of 5 sentences.
The problem is that people usually will read the first couple of sentences out of each paragraph so having four short ones (divided up by topic) works a lot better than two long ones. Even while reviewing it I couldn't get myself to finish each paragraph. | |
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| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 3:21:55 PM | Overall, I think your profile reads very dense. You have to read it fairly slowly to understand it.
Your lists of wants is very long and I could see it as a big turn off. You have nice pics, but I would stop reading once I got 1/3 the way through the second paragraph. Maybe you should just talk about your top 5 wants in a man??? Listing what you want can actually be a way to attract men, assuming it's done right. | |
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| MY PROFILE! Can I get some advice please?
Posted: 8/16/2009 3:27:45 PM | You have nice pictures And the content of your profile seemed alright.
I would work on formatting. A couple of other people mentioned it: split your larger paragraphs into a few smaller ones. They'll be much easier to read, right now they're a bit of a struggle to get through.
Also, I would change your interests to lower case from caps lock. WRITING LIKE THIS makes it seem like your shouting.
Good luck! | |
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