| Good profile idea executed poorly?
Posted: 8/16/2009 2:27:14 PM | Hey all,
I think I've got a pretty neat idea for a profile, but I don't think I executed it very well. A part of me thinks it's just stupid and makes me sound boring, but at the same time I think I can make my profile a lot better. I know I need better pictures so feedback on my actual profile would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks :) | |
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| Good profile idea executed poorly?
Posted: 8/16/2009 2:38:21 PM | I think the idea itself is amazing...but it could just be that I am a guy and I love cars.
Maybe we need a woman's opinion here. | |
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| Good profile idea executed poorly?
Posted: 8/16/2009 7:28:50 PM | | Yup sounds like a sale pitch.. no really it's fine you've painted a clear picture of yourself.. but ya better pictures. | |
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| Good profile idea executed poorly?
Posted: 8/16/2009 7:43:47 PM | | that was one of the most origional things i had ever seen! i would so e-mail you to chat if i were closer in proximity, or age. | |
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| Good profile idea executed poorly?
Posted: 8/16/2009 11:20:37 PM | | Nice, that was very original and I liked how you ended it. :) The content looks like it will cater to women with a light-hearted sense of humor like your own. It gives a good sense of who you are, what you're doing in life and your future goals, and what you're looking for in a woman without giving too much away. Photos show you in your element (good), perhaps add a couple more...maybe some that show your face a little better like a close-up. | |
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mokab
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Joined: 7/26/2009
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| Good profile idea executed poorly?
Posted: 8/17/2009 4:15:15 AM | Great idea!
If my chasis weren't so rusty, I'd certainly take it for a spin.
But I'm more into antique muscle cars (if there is such a thing).
Why oh why are the creative ones always too young, too far or too far gone-LOL
Gotta quit my crying, I'll rust completely out.
Good luck, unfortunately you're even too young for my daughters (I've got twins-25)
I'll have to keep my eye out for you a newer model Toyota or Mitsubishi.
 Just an old Model K (Kelly) | |
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