| Any suggestions on profile welcome
Posted: 10/4/2009 10:52:38 AM | Hello,
I just want some people honest opinions on my profile, I have been on a few dates with some nice ladies only problem I seem to attract and get with ladies who don’t have much in the life,
I mean like job or direction were they want to be,
I want to try and not got out with these ladies as I end up liking them and feel compelled to help them make their life better which I think is wrong of me.
What it is am looking for is honest about what you see from looking at my profile,
Now I get told that in person I am the complete opposition to my profile
that am quite funny and seemed very confident which I am with people as that is one of my best skills more to do with I have worked with assisting people all my life
Any suggestions or think you may think look bad please tell me
Thanks for your time and help
Regards
ste | |
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| Any suggestions on profile welcome
Posted: 10/4/2009 11:37:33 AM | I'll do a quick drive-by:
- username......off putting, maybe it's UK but don't know what a scouser is, don't WANT TO.
- headline......never ask for contact, screams PLEASE TALK TO ME!!
- about me.....not great, not awful, make many of the usual mistakes, read profile writing tips, post here after a rewrite. | |
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| Any suggestions on profile welcome
Posted: 10/4/2009 11:53:33 AM | Thanks for your reply will do
yes scouser is a term for people who come from the city of liverpool uk
i will go and have a look at that thanks very much
ste | |
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| Any suggestions on profile welcome
Posted: 10/4/2009 4:40:44 PM | For me, your key is the 'helping others' image. I was immediately interested in your occupation as 'support worker', having a son with Autism, but you then went on to say you are in the process of joining the Navy. Again, for me, the perception is that you'd be away a lot of the time and that turned off the warm-and-fuzzy buzz I was enjoying.
Is this something you can address in your profile? In what capacity will you be working with the Navy?
There are some issues with punctuation and phrasing that made the profile body a bit difficult to read, but I'm sure you'll fix that.
I found it interesting that your email restrictions have 'must have photo' but you're not worried about girls that do drugs or women that are married contacting you. !!
The profile really is not as bad as some, but it definitely needs a bit more detail to show off your confidence and humour. Ask for a confident, independant woman who enjoys her career and can share your passion for adventure. (Those are the secret code words for women that are employed and have their sh*t together - that may help filter out some of your 'project cases'!) | |
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| Any suggestions on profile welcome
Posted: 10/5/2009 3:33:39 PM | Our thank you for your suggestions
I agree with you about my English skills they our poor, I have dyslexia
But should be no excuse, am thinking of enrolling on a English course try and spruce up my poor vocabulary
But trust me it’s well better now than it was couple of years back
yeah my goal for the navy is career orientated working in caring environment is great and rewarding but the one thing I have found over 11 years of working in the caring environment is their is not much promotion and certainly no pay rises
were as if had been in the navy for 11 years I be on way above double what am on now
And I have my kids to think off as I am struggling now to provided decent for them
I will try and take a look at my profile and think of ways to improve it
Thank you for talking the time and response
Yours sincerely
Stephen | |
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| Any suggestions on profile welcome
Posted: 10/5/2009 4:03:39 PM | your name is a bit of a put of, calling yourself sexy is kinda arrogant.
i think ur profile lacks any personality really, it sounds like your advertising support workers, ur website and boxercise lol.
also i dont like the bit where u say about going on dates with other women, but maybe thats just me??
hope all of this helps n sorry if im too critical lol.
good luck :) | |
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| Any suggestions on profile welcome
Posted: 11/3/2009 12:01:24 PM | Hello All,
I followled some of your advices and now am getting no messages or reply's
i think it comes down to women i like dont want to date a man with kids
i mean i can understand but its a dating site i thought the idea was too date lol
so if any of you kind people can take a look at my profile and tell me what you think of it ?
be honest now
Kindest Reagards,
ste | |
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