| Profile Review please
Posted: 10/12/2009 9:12:28 PM | Hey ladies,
I was wondering if someone would be nice enough to review my profile. I haven't gotten an email in quite sometime. So I am possibly doing something wrong. Please extend your wisdom
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| Profile Review please
Posted: 10/12/2009 9:18:52 PM | A lot of it is pics. Get 3 to 20 good ones, rotate a few until some start working. While it may seem wrong to mention it - you're having battling with the contrast balance, photoshop so features are visible.
The text doesn't really stand out, its dull, but Mississauga isn't racist, you're 6'1" - some good pics are likely all you need. | |
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| Profile Review please
Posted: 10/13/2009 9:47:38 AM | With your darker skin, perhaps a lighter background would make you stand out. Nice photo, however, it's just the contrast.
Headline---the word that you are looking for is "peek"
3rd Paragraph is a bit wordy. Break it up a bit and make it easier to read. | |
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| Profile Review please
Posted: 10/13/2009 10:48:53 AM | Change the picture, it's doing you no favors but if I look hard I can tell you're a handsome man. And for the first date - don't just say you have things in mind, what are they? AND you're looking for hang-out buddies, change it to dating. You probably have lots of hang-out buddies you seem to be on here looking for someone to date so make that more obvious. AND don't wait for women to email you, do searches and reach out to ones nearby. You may find yourself making your initial choices based on the thumbnail pictures you see - that will prove to you how important that picture is - it is truly the first impression you get, on here or in person.
Good luck! | |
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