| Review me please
Posted: 10/13/2009 12:36:33 AM | | So I put a new pic up and its fairly decent and I am just wondering what is wrong with the profile. I send out thoughtful messages and get no responses. I get looks from other members but draw no interest, so Im just wondering what I need to change. | |
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| Review me please
Posted: 10/13/2009 6:33:22 AM | Okay first of all feel free to mix in some paragraphs. Really they are your friends and make your text much easier to read.
Next lose the shirt off self pic. Instead get some pics up of you DJing and having fun!
"I like music, made it my life, and also like to take random road trips. "
You took a random road trip in that sentence. Try to structure ideas a little better.
"My last road trip turned into a relocation."
Cool is there a funny story behind this? What does this tell me?
Im the "nice" guy but I do have a backbone and am not a real pushover, I also have an edge to me."
You know where nice guys finish right?
I like "cute" girls because the "hot" ones aren't attracted to me anyways, lol."
Negative self-image much? Come on man have some confidence!
Beyond that there are a few grammar issues and miss-spellings. Also come up with a plan for your first date sections. Girls like guys with a plan!! | |
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| Review me please
Posted: 10/13/2009 10:31:22 AM | It may sound silly, however, don't send those silly roses. When I look at a profile and it shows one or zero roses remaining, I move on. It makes me think that you're involved or that there has been someone that you were soooo into (within that past 30 days) that I couldn't compete for your attention. Why bother.
Maybe an action DJing pic? | |
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| Review me please
Posted: 10/13/2009 11:13:13 AM | Don't tell us to get past your pictures, which are dark, blurry and glum.
When you make no effort to post a good picture, spell correctly or give us much information - we have no reason to believe you'll make any effort to meet or date.
Simple, right?
In the same context, you need to reach out don't ask us to chase you around and by that I mean you need to initiate the first contact.
Make the changes, and good luck! | |
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| Review me please
Posted: 10/13/2009 1:56:15 PM | Your pics are really bad. Pics will make or break a profile no matter how well written it is...and unfortuantely, yours is not very well written. I know I'm being harsh, but this is a competative sea of fish and you need to market yourself extremely well.
Read the profile writing tips posted at the top of this forum and start over. | |
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