| Still not working need a review. Posted: 10/23/2009 8:31:48 PM | | Hi, I've tried updating picutures and I have written and re-written this profile over and over again. Do you have any suggestions to liven up the profile and make it more interesting, I'm out of ideas. | |
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| Still not working need a review. Posted: 10/23/2009 8:41:34 PM | Hey
Too bad the second photo is not in focus. It would be so much better for your main profile picture! Do you drink: Prefer not to say? Are you a "dipsomaniac"? You mentioned "drinks" twice more. That's a big red flag right there. It would be nice to know how you get on with your son's mom or if you have shared or full custody. No big explanation, just a short note so women reading your profile will know there's no drama. Other than that your profile is quite nice. I like it. Good luck fishing! | |
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| Still not working need a review. Posted: 10/23/2009 9:02:54 PM | | Corrections made. I changed it to socially. I don't drink often really. As far as the October fest(s) two different locations and differnt vibes. One is a traditional beer umpa band the other is a Carnival on Garrison. So I put that distincition there. | |
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| Still not working need a review. Posted: 10/23/2009 10:35:50 PM | honestly I cant see much wrong with it. If you're not happy about women not starting anything, is because generally that's outside their gender role, and besides they always have that guy to reply to rather than thinking something up of something to you. If they allow you to see that they've visited your profile, consider it a green light as it means that chances are they at the very least think you're cute. If you're having trouble getting women to reply to you, then take things more lightly. Personally I like to keep my emails short and if their profile is provoking, challenging. Works about 40% of the time and I don't even have to think about things that much, I just go with my gut feeling. That way I get to email more girls I like and that way it's more likely one will happen to like what I have to say. cheers and good luck doc. | |
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