| Judging this book by its cover (review request :D )
Posted: 10/24/2009 10:26:41 AM | So not too long ago I had a moment of clarity and remade my profile. I would love to hear what anyone has to say about it. Thanks in advance!
Also, on a tangential note, apparently posts have to be at least 200 characters or somesuch. So, here's one of my favorite quotes: "Insanity is repetition of the same action, expecting a different result." -- A. Einstein | |
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| Judging this book by its cover (review request :D )
Posted: 10/24/2009 10:37:51 AM | Hey Shane
You need a picture where you smile! Seriously, a smile will get you much further.
Three things stuck out while reading your profile: "Playing video games" and "a lot of time on the internet" are bad. Women will want to know you are a) mature and b) will make time for them. How about "I do like to play video games, but would rather spend my time with you..." at which point you can describe what you are looking for.
Then: "Probably don't recognize". I hope you didn't mean it that way, but it sounds condescending. Leave that bit out. (I have read Asimov myself. Would you have guessed that by looking at my profile?)
Lastly, towards the bottom you begin every sentence with "I". Try to rearrange your sentences a bit.
Good luck fishing! | |
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