| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/26/2009 5:43:44 AM | | Hi, I'm not new here and have made plenty of profiles before. However, I am normally guilty of making a profile that makes me laugh. So this is the first time that I have tried to create a profile that is normal. So any feedback or ideas would be much appreciated. Thank you for your time! | |
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| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/26/2009 7:03:29 AM | | Your goal says you only want to "Hang out" which implies you are not interested in a romantic relationship. Perhaps all you need is your current friends to hang out with? | |
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| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/26/2009 8:17:31 AM | | The first date idea is just odd and the profile itself is off. You don't really give any insight about yourself. More detail would be appreciated (I would think). Also maybe a couple of different pictures. And you come off rather cryptic by not answering questions about religion, job, etc. | |
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| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/26/2009 9:00:17 AM |
Profession: I have one You should tell us your real profession even if it's something generic like "retail" or "factory worker". | |
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| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/26/2009 10:18:44 AM | | Except from your interest in the Penguins, your profile seems fine, with the right amount of funny. However as Wibnix suggested, you should add more details about those interest of yours. | |
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| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/26/2009 11:44:53 AM | Thanks for all of the input. I have chosen to do a complete tear down and re-do. I will add more details later.
Thanks again. | |
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| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/27/2009 2:12:26 PM |
Would somebody care to offer input on the completely re-worked profile, please. It sounds like your profession should say "Actor". | |
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| May I request a profile review, please?
Posted: 10/27/2009 4:44:18 PM | I think this is another case of - why would we take you/your effort here seriously?
You're funny, but you're funny in person too presumably and it isn't reeling in the chicks. Be a bit more serious here, talk about what you're looking for and why, and what you'd do with someone special once you met them. Let our imaginations and your nice smile do the rest.
GOod luck! | |
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