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Posted: 10/29/2009 10:39:33 PM | | In Atlanta I get tons of e-mails! Just moved to Ft. Lauderdale and nothing yet! What should I do to aclimate? Hope this doesn't mean I'll be lonely here....XXXXXXXXX XXXX XXXXXXXXX XXX X XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXX X XXXX XXX XXX XXX XXX X X XXX XXXXX XXX XXX XXX XXXXX XX XX XXX XXX XXX XXXXX XXXXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XXXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX ... | |
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Posted: 10/29/2009 10:55:22 PM | Start by listing more interests. Shoot for 9-12
None of your pictures are real. Or at least that's how it will come off to your viewers.
Your "about me" section says hardly any hing about you, and nothing of substance. take a look at the profile writing tips in green font at the top of the forums.
Your "first date" area you come off as a total b!tch | |
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Posted: 10/29/2009 11:34:56 PM | | And I thought it was pretty good! But don't know why pics look fake...I took them off my friend's internet site. Looks like the men here are much smarter than in Atlanta.... | |
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Posted: 10/29/2009 11:53:27 PM |
I took them off my friend's internet site
..uh huh...
Smart people never email others who have grainy pictures that barely show the other person | |
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Posted: 11/1/2009 9:50:08 PM | | How's this? XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX | |
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Posted: 11/2/2009 6:32:06 AM | You have only one photo. It does look great on the profile page but as a thumb nail not so good. The way you look on this request page is how you look on any search. You should change that and add more photos including a full body shot.
Body type – prefer not to say – why is that???
About me section says very little about you. You need to add some meat to that!!
Good luck,
Ron | |
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Posted: 11/2/2009 6:59:10 AM | Fix the photo so that it shows up properly as a thumbnail. Post a full body shot of yourself.
Tell us your true body type. Saying "Prefer not to say" makes people think the worst.
But it is steaming hot there, not good for red headed psople! - Delete or rephrase in a positive way.
I was on here before about two years ago and I am seeing the same people! - Delete. Says nothing about you.
Well, it takes a while to find the LTR of your dreams, doesn't it? - Delete. Obvious.
I am not a perfectinist. - Delete.
I like travel, hiking, cruises, short stories, cats, gardening, wines, and making the best out of everything God gives me. - Go into more detail about the things you like to do. Where have you traveled? What cruises have you been on? Do you have cats? How many? You mention God; are you religious? | |
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Posted: 11/2/2009 9:51:16 AM |
You have only one photo.
It's interesting that this new photo looks nothing like the previous three, which were all too blurry to tell if they matched too.
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Posted: 11/2/2009 10:26:08 AM | Hi Gagaphooey….not sure if you’re referring to Lady Gaga and going Phooey or what, but either way, it isn’t an approachable name. Feminine and approachable are what you’re aiming for in a name. Luvnlife (and Ron) gave you some really good suggestions.
A few more suggestions…
1) The “I love you” as a headline comes across as shallow and a player or as easy or desperate or lonely….it doesn’t work. Nix it.
2) You’re a successful, intelligent woman, but it doesn’t come across in your profile very well.
3) Add something about your job as a speech therapist. Do you work for a school? Do you work with children or adults who’ve had stokes or ?? Do you like it?
4) Nix the looking for a “cute” guy…everyone’s definition of cute is different, and this makes you come across as shallow which I doubt you are.
5) You’re a very attractive woman. Get more photos posted of YOU only. In all kinds of garb from dressy to casual. Make sure you have 1 or 2 full body shots.
6) Nix that you moved to FL to be near your son. The guy reading it wonders how needy your son is…or conversely, how needy you are.
7) Put a body type…”prefer not to say” is usually something men will not search on.
8) Men are looking for intelligent, attractive, articulate women. Work on bringing specifics into your profile so he can see those qualities.
Best to you. DenverSky5280  | |
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