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Show ALL Forums  > Profile Reviews  > I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of vie      Mod Threads Home login   Page 1 of 1  Author  Thread: I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile.  patkreno Joined: 12/19/2008 Msg: 1 view profile History I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. Posted: 10/30/2009 7:01:04 AM I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. I recently revised and edited it to update my information and give it a bit more pizazz if you will. Could someone please look and tell me if I'm a total moron or if I need to change something here? Do I come across as non-communicable? Please let me know!  luvnlife2 Joined: 12/17/2006 Msg: 2 view profile History I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. Posted: 10/30/2009 7:26:20 AM Job number one for you is to get some great photos of yourself smiling. Get a friend to help you out with this because the cell phone in the mirror shots just don't work.  You go first Joined: 5/1/2008 Msg: 3 view profile History I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. Posted: 10/30/2009 7:43:00 AM Ditto on the photo. More, no cellphone self portraits (hand the camera to a friend), get outside, SMILE! You do write well. But - more details are important as this gives your viewer something to find in common and makes conversation starters. You mention you play in a band - will this be your full time occupation or a passion? What type of music? It sounds like you may enjoy your dayjob - do you enjoy interacting with people? I'd like to have heard why you chose "Arizona" as an interest. Your viewer may be from there or also have a soft spot for it. It would also help your viewer to add a line or two about who you are hoping to meet here. Use positive language only. You may want to consider dropping all but the absolute dealbreakers on your email settings. Why look so picky? Good luck!  sarcastic12 Joined: 10/11/2009 Msg: 4 I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. Posted: 10/30/2009 8:16:50 AM Hi, I read your profile and think if that is really who you r, don't change a thing.  BombChelle Joined: 8/31/2008 Msg: 5 view profile History I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. Posted: 10/30/2009 8:41:06 AM I agree with the other suggestions but DEFINITELY get some more pics and one with you smiling. If you have to use a cam phone, so be it, but you can achieve more if you get creative..  patkreno Joined: 12/19/2008 Msg: 6 view profile History I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. Posted: 11/1/2009 1:44:31 PM I went ahead and made some changes, does this look better?  PolkaDotUmbrella Joined: 4/20/2009 Msg: 7 view profile History I would very much appreciate it if I could get a woman's point of view on my profile. Posted: 11/1/2009 2:08:48 PM Not sure what it looked like before, but thought it looked just fine. Some people don't like smiling all that much, I'm one of them. I thought it was good, I'd message ya :) Page 1 of 1

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