| Profile Review: Descriptive and Funny
Posted: 10/31/2009 8:49:48 PM | Hi,
Hoping to some feedback on my profile. I put down what I think conveys who I am and what I enjoy. Also wanted to throw in some light humor there.
Thoughts? Is it written well? Any constructive feedback is welcome.
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| Profile Review: Descriptive and Funny
Posted: 10/31/2009 10:49:39 PM | 
Very well done.
Change 'wondering' to 'wAndering' in a couple of places. If you could rework a few of your sentences so they don't all start with "I" it would be even better.
Your main photo has sunglasses and that is technically against the photo rules for a clear head shot. It may get deleted. A closeup smiling head/shoulders shot is actually better for your main as your viewer can more easily see your face in a search thumbnail and makes you look more approachable. | |
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