| Requesting Profile Review
Posted: 11/1/2009 7:08:09 AM | my 21 cents...
1. label your pics...especially that 3rd one. (is that even you? if not, remove it).
2. a few more interests wouldn't hurt.
3. your about me section: the first paragraph is not needed. we would know you're educated by your smarts and job. no need to repeat. same with the comment about your eyes. if you have great blue eyes, show that in a pic. you shouldnt have to tell someone that and that goes for your physique as well.
4. try to make your about me section more cohesive. focus on you first. i liked the little first job story. and i see your bits of humour. Keep that but allow the profile to flow a little better by talking about you, then who you are seeking. i like that you broke it up in smaller chunks as well.
5. beef up that first date section. i can tell you are creative. make it unique.
good luck...happy fishing...  | |
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