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Posted: 11/1/2009 7:01:31 AM | | I'm kind of new here and would like some constructive advice on my profile.I get alot of profile veiws,send out quite a few e-mails but get very little response.Are the pics ok?How about the profile?Any advice would be great .This is probably one of the topics that's been discussed to death but I need the input . | |
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Posted: 11/1/2009 9:34:27 AM | 34 cents..
1. your 5th and 7th pic are your best ones. they clearly show your face. i would change the main one to one of those. i like the range of pics as well. the 3rdmight get removed since you aren't in it.
2. you have a lot of interests but some are repeated and redundant. camping and campfires. i mean a lot of them in your list could fall under the great outdoors.
3. the about me section repeats your interests. remove them and focus on your personal traits. no need to tell us you like music and harleys. we can see that in your interests and pics. we need more about you. after all, you're looking long term. you want to post as much as possible to find a compatible match. and separate your bio into smaller chunks. makes it easier to read and flows nicely. start with yourself, then what you are seeking. you've got a great start to what you're looking for.
4. you may also want to set up some age parameters. not sure if that's important to you or not.
5. your heading is kinda....one dimensional. with all your interests, you are not JUST a biker. you said in your profile "gentleman with a bit of a wild streak"....that's much more catchy....
god luck and happy fishing.......... | |
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Posted: 11/1/2009 11:00:56 AM | | Thanks for the advise,I'll work on it. | |
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Posted: 11/1/2009 12:57:48 PM | This version looks great! (a bit of cleanup on the spacing needed, though)
Except for the Harley thing, I'd be all over this. When you're sending an introduction message, keep it short, light and casual. Don't just put Hi, Hello or Hey in the subject line. Mention something specific from her profile, make an appropriate comment and ask a question.
You'll do fine. | |
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