Hi there,
Smile! You have 6 photos, all of which show you scowling at the camera. If you do nothing else, take a decent picture of yourself smiling, this isn't myspace after all, and delete all those moody, badly lit other pictures. They do nothing for you.
Lots of interests, that's great :)
too many times I find myself trying to get a conversation going and ending up with nothing left to say since most people don't reply with some thought and involvement. I really dislike trying to learn something about someone and all it ends up as is me asking 21 questions about you and in the end getting bored of the conversation or running out of topics. So if you message me ladies please be involved in the convo keep the few word sentences for someone else haha.
Negative. Sounds like you have a high opinion of your own intellect and are being pretty condescending about other people. I'd just cut all of this.
I can be a gentleman and a nice guy, but don't mistake it for weakness. I have an up most respect for all women and I like to treat them properly rather then the ways that most of you have been treated and ended up on here. So even though sometimes I can be a bit of a softy I'm still all man and I don't take s.h.i.t. If you want a man you can control look elsewhere but if you want someone who is there to share life with you and have a good time doing it well message me haha.
More negativity and the assumption that other people are not quite on the same level as yourself. Stay positive! You say you're an optimist but then you have paragraphs like this which sound like you've been stung before and aren't feeling that cheerful right now. We all have bad days, but your profile is not the place to express your contempt for the bad situations people end up in.
Maybe a movie or dinner, maybe a walk and picnic, or maybe something a little more challenging like paintball or go karting.
This is the only part of your first date section that I would keep, the rest is indecisive or negative again.
Great potential in your profile, just get some decent pictures and cut the negative vibes.
Good luck :)
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