| Profile review please.
Posted: 11/2/2009 6:11:43 AM | I am trying this out to see whats out there. - Delete. Obvious.
I have not had much luck in the past and would like to meet someone who i can get along with. - Delete. Very negative and sounds like you can't get along with people.
Right now i am going to school to study game design and i love it so far. - Are you meeting women at school? That would be the natural way for you to meet people.
I would describe myself as a nice person. - Delete. Everyone thinks they are "nice". It says nothing.
I try to get along with everyone and i am pretty laid back. - Delete. Sounds like you have trouble getting along with people. "Laid back" sounds like "Lazy". Is that what you are saying?
Alot of people tell me that i can hold a decent conversation and such. - Tell us what you think, not what "A lot of peole" say.
Alot of people also tell me i look young for 22. Lol. - Delete. Let the women make their own decision based on your photos.
There are some things that are unforgivable in this world but somehow i can find the good in people and manage to forgive them. - Delete. This all sounds way too negative.
The kind of girl i am interested is someone who always has a smile on her face. - Then you need to get some great photos of yourself with a smile on your face.
Proofread and spell check everything you write and correct your mistakes. | |
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