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 SuperShoultz

Joined: 10/29/2009
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Posted: 11/1/2009 10:58:54 PM
So, I have came back for a second go and see if second time is the charm!
(here is to hoping, right?)

Anyways, I just got done filling out my profile and such, and I think it could bring in a couple of messages.

So, great people of PlentyOfFish, what do you got to say about my profile?

All feedback is greatly appreciated.

Oh, and how come you can not embed the imeem player anymore?
 SuperShoultz

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Posted: 11/2/2009 5:05:31 PM
37 views and not one review? is it that bad?
 HouseKitten86

Joined: 7/2/2009
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Posted: 11/2/2009 5:21:15 PM
Hi there,

The headphones - do you wear them because of the aural atresia or do you just tend to wear them a lot because you like music? If it's not because of your disability then I would consider fewer shots with them on - if it is then never mind.

Your main shot, you look quite weary. A smile is always an improvement :)

Lots of interests, that's great.


friends of mine referred to as a Gentle Giant or a Giant Teddy Bear.


This is sweet, but I've friendzoned men in the past who could also have been referred to this way. I think it may on the wrong side of cute.


When I grow up, I want to be a Registered Nurse.


Again, might be the wrong side of the whole cute and childlike impression. You're 21 so it's all too easy for you to sound younger than you are depending on how you phrase things.

You haven't said anything about what you're looking for - consider adding a paragraph about that.

Good luck :)
 deltadallas

Joined: 7/13/2009
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Posted: 11/2/2009 5:24:45 PM
the first thing is : change your picture to something that is not too close and with you dressed up or something. another that i didn't like is the part about the first date: need to be at your house ....cooking. this is not a good first date or a safe first date. i think you need to leave that out. put what you like to do when not working, how you want to be treated, how you treat your special one and what your pet peeves are.



good luck,
 SuperShoultz

Joined: 10/29/2009
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Posted: 11/4/2009 4:25:25 AM
How does it look now?
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