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Posted: 11/2/2009 11:58:32 AM | | So, I never get any replys...or anything for that matter. Does my profile suck or am I just pug-ug-fugly? If I am deemed "every branch on the ugly tree" then Darwin can kiss my nutsack!! Everyone always tells me that personality counts, then I should be finding them off with 3 hands! The few women I have exchanged a few letters with have even said I have great personality, but those same women don't want to hang out. So tell me, what is going on? | |
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| need some critique action
Posted: 11/2/2009 12:08:02 PM | Your pictures need work my man. They blow. You need to be smiling in your main photo… make one just like your third picture, but try smiling next time. It will only hurt for a few minutes, trust me. The one where you are drinking? POF no-no if you are seriously looking. The main picture you have… just kill it completely. You should have 6-8 pictures up in total, but the main photo will make or break your entire profile.
I liked your Date Night tab comment. Add a space after the comma in “casual, one-sided”.
I would nuke the “Hey, whoever”…. Line.
Not sure how the women will take the “recreational arguing” comment.
I would leave off the harsh times line as well. Leave that for after you meet someone and want to scare the hell out of them!
Talk about what kind of woman you are looking for using only positive qualities and no negatives.
Cheers! | |
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Posted: 11/2/2009 12:11:19 PM | You are just looking for "friends" makes it confusing
"recreational arguing" sounds odd and obtuse
If you are truly looking for "just friends" and you just got out of something serious. Why are you sweating that no girls want to talk to you? If you are looking to get serious or date then I would change what you are looking for. | |
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