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 Annualistic

Joined: 10/9/2009
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Posted: 11/2/2009 4:23:21 PM
Hi there y'all

Im completely new to the forum and fairly fresh on the site as well if im honest. Thought my first post may as well be here and i'd see if I could get some feedback on my profile.

Thanks in advance peoples!
 luvnlife2

Joined: 12/17/2006
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Posted: 11/2/2009 4:26:44 PM
Job number one for you is to get some great photos. Get rid of the baby picture and the group shots.
 HouseKitten86

Joined: 7/2/2009
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Posted: 11/2/2009 4:36:23 PM
Hi there,

Your headline is 'meh'. What, you can't be bothered to do this properly? Think of something original to put here and if you can't think of anything, look at other people's profiles for inspiration.

You need some better photos if possible, preferably a main one where you're smiling. Your current one looks like there's a badly cropped ex-girlfriend resting her head on your shoulder, and your third picture has your arm round... another ex? Your sister? Who knows - ditch pictures with women getting close to you.

'Prefer not to say' under whether you drink is a bad idea - it looks like you've got something to hide. It's not unusual for people to drink every now and then and it's less of a taboo than smoking, which you're fine to note that you do, so change it to an answer either way.

Only 3 interests - try and bulk this section out some more.


im not looking for a relationship straight from the word go


Possibly cut this sentence. No need to limit yourself since you have no idea who you're going to meet on here yet. You've already put dating in the 'looking for' section after all.

Your description could use some more detail. You've got the bones of it but it's pretty sparse. What do you enjoy doing? What other interests do you have? At the moment stuff like 'I like to go out or stay in' is pretty generic and not unique - what about you is special or makes you different?

No first date idea?

This could be a good profile but you do need to put some work into it :) good luck!
 Annualistic

Joined: 10/9/2009
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Posted: 11/2/2009 5:02:46 PM
Thank you both for the quick and detailed reviews!

I've added a few improvements and a few more solo pics and will be working on it a whole lot more. Hopefully its much improved now though, I now see the error of my ways it's been great to get good feedback!

Thanks again :)
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