| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/2/2009 6:40:12 PM | | I'm new to POF. I read the threads for profile writing tips, and tried to write my profile using the information learned. I'm not sure how my profile will come across to a woman reading it. Please give me feedback on it. Thanks. | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/2/2009 7:27:00 PM | I like your profile as is. there isn't anything that really stands out as bad or detrimental. you covered all your bases. maybe just a few more pics, and remember that by choosing dating, instead of long term, it might exclude you some searches.
great stuff though... | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/2/2009 7:44:17 PM | Hey Mr. "Copper" (I hate you guys BTW) - Your profile is pretty is well written with the exception that you need more pictures of that cute face of yours! You are are a good looking young man with a great smile. Flaunt that $hit!! More pictures so I can dream of something GOOD for a change, Ron is starting to get old these days. Post as many as you can (8) and run with it! Lost all the ones with shades on though. No g/f's or buddies in them as you will break all the rules of POF.
Try and re-word your About me section and lose the "I" starts to your sentences. The women don't want to think it's all about YOU, yanno? I can tell you are a good guy and that isn't the case, but all of the "I" things you have going on there scream of "it's all about me",
Side note: football isn't really a sport. But that is a personal opinion. And with that said, GO Bronco's! Ugh. I really hate football. Well, second to soccer anyway.
Cheers!
Edit: that would be "pretty well written". Where are my reading glasses? Old sucks. | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/2/2009 7:55:32 PM | | Thanks majicwonder. Very funny review, with good feedback. I'll make the edits. Thanks again. | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/2/2009 9:03:51 PM | Definitely, more pictures, especially anything in a tight white t-shirt. (shuttup, Majic)
You have some good information, but it could be great. Put "Trinidad" in your Interests field, then search other users by clicking on the word.
Where you talk about travel, is there any other place you'd really, really like to see? why? When you talk about foods you like, is there something you'd like to try? or anything really disgusting you have tried? These may be things your viewer is also interested in or you can ask your viewer to tell you if they've been there/eaten that.
Good luck! | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/2/2009 9:22:06 PM | OP - you are a great looking young man that should have ZERO problems finding the hotties. I just wish I were your age.
Go with YGF's suggestion with the skin tight white Tee (that's a legit pic for POF, just no nips!!). I bet that would work with your build you have goin on. And I WILL steal your photos for my profile. Take THAT to the bank mister!!
Listen to YGF' cuz she knows WTF she us talking about. Well for a Canadian I guess... :-) | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/3/2009 5:34:02 AM | | YGF, thanks so much for your feedback. It's good stuff. I'll work on more pics, and add more info as suggested. Thanks. | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/3/2009 5:35:43 AM | | LOL. majicwonder, thanks again. It's a boost to hear the kinds words in this thread. | |
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| Please review my profile
Posted: 11/3/2009 7:17:31 AM | Well you got input from two of my favorite reviewers so go with it.
You are a good looking guy with a really inviting smile, you will do well!!
Do be a bit careful though, YGF is so cute that she doesn’t really need a profile (so who knows if she really knows how to write one?) and majic hates football so we know it is wise to question his opinions. | |
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