Ok I'm not baking you cookies. Your lucky to get a free profile review lol
Here are some suggested changes:
To begin with, my name is Brandon. I'm in my fourth year of college majoring in Cardiovascular Technology in Macon, GA right now but I'm from a small town near Athens, Ga.
A little too much info, just stick to what you are majoring in and leave the where you are at for when you do talk to someone. Also, you may want to put in here that you switched from culinary to cardiovascular. Could be a good opening line for a girl to ask how you made that move.
I have a very mellow personality and I'm a very easy person to get along with.
Expand on this..what makes you mellow and how are you easy to get along with others.
Take some things from after your music and put it up here. Make this paragraph about you.
Comedy and music are my two main sources of stress relief (I will listen to any kind of music except hip hop, rap or country)
Make this your interests paragraph. List the music you LIKE, not the music you DON'T LIKE. Add the movies you like in there too.
(Shaun of the Dead is my favorite, or any other good comedy)
That is a cute movie..well what I saw of it ...anyway...
I'm not a typical southern guy, I don't have a southern accent and I don't drive a huge truck with deer huntin' stickers on it. What I am however is an honest guy, I'm not fake and I actually have morals. Crazy, I know.
Keep..but I am a little tossed as if you should put it in the about me or leave it at the end.
For the first date section, take out the part that says "I hate this part". Leave it to dinner or to the cooking someone dinner since you were in culinary school.
Good luck.
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