| Could you review my profile please?
Posted: 11/2/2009 10:51:28 PM | Well... it's not great.
The headline "Looking for Mrs Right" is overdone here, and you probably want her daughter, MISS Right! Hey - that could be your headline: Looking for Mrs Right's daughter. OK, so it's lame, you can do better.
Quit smoking.
For your occupation, you have ??? . Are you actually employed at something? Or are you a student? Something general in here is better than nothing. But - don't put "unemployed". In that case, blank may be better.
You could maybe start your opening line with : " Lips are important. They tell most people a lot about a person's smile, but for me they tell me what you're saying. Literally. A smile is just an exclamation mark!" This way, it introduces the fact you're hard of hearing but also explains how you can communicate with your partner.
Maybe start with these and work on expanding your description of your hobbies, activities, etc. | |
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