| can i get a hand? Posted: 11/3/2009 8:24:14 AM | | It's been quite a while since my last profile review, about a year or so, I stopped using the site when i met someone for a while, but now I'm on the market again, can anyone lend me a hand with my profile? | |
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| can i get a hand? Posted: 11/3/2009 8:39:50 AM | Can I date your dog? He’s cute.
That is the only thing you can see in your main picture dude. Your last picture should be your main one.
The fact that you do drugs socially… you might want to explain to the reader what kind of drugs. Weed? Crack? Heroin? You are going to seriously limit the number of women interested in you due to this fact. As long as you are aware of that one…
You need to run your profile text through a word processor and cut/paste the text back into your profile. You have several spelling errors. This is a turn off to many women and men alike.
You need to reword almost every sentence in your profile text as they are all screaming, “It’s all about me, myself and I”.
What kind of goals have you set for yourself? To kick the H habit?
Why do you have certain words bold? It’s really distracting to the reader.
NIN, MM and Aerosmith in the same sentence? Wow. I guess a .666 batting average is pretty decent. But seriously? Aerosmith? You might want to rethink your tastes in music man.
If you have been on POF in the past, you know that YOU are going to have to be the one to contact the women first in 95% of the cases.
Cheers! | |
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