There's a few things I'm not sure about, like whether I should mention what I do for a living in my description even though it's in the other block on the screen. I consider it to be a pretty relevant part of who I am though.

Also, should I nix the picture on the beach? It seems like the jury is out about whether shirtless pics are a good idea. I'm no bodybuilder or anything, but I think it's a decent pic.