| How to make my profile better
Posted: 11/5/2009 1:58:09 AM | | Hi was hoping someone can help me make my profile better, I have been messaging sone women with no responses. I think that my profile is too weird and if you can suggest me to change something that will be great, im not sure if it's my profile or my looks that keep women from just getting an initial response. Or maybe my first message to girls is bad idk. | |
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| How to make my profile better
Posted: 11/5/2009 2:58:46 AM | I like it, seems nice enough, but . . .
"my goal is to able to wash my clothes on my stomach, so I can save money on laundry."
It's not funny. Delete!
":)"
I think smiley faces are creepy.
"I avoid confrontations whenever possible"
What is a woman if not a confrontation . . . ?
"I was born and raised in Orange County."
Points off for that one.
"True Blood."
No.
"Snatch."
Yes.
"if u want to know more about me please send me a message :)"
"if u want to know more"
"if u want to"
"if u"
"u" | |
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| How to make my profile better
Posted: 11/5/2009 7:18:51 AM | Job number one for you is to get some better photos without the beer, drinks and buddies. Just some great photos of you.
my goal is to able to wash my clothes on my stomach, so I can save money on laundry. I have almost attained this goal, I'm glad to say :) - Delete.
I've lost a bunch of weight since last year. - Delete. We can see what you look like in your photos.
I have been described as a funny dork or nerd. - "Dork" and "nerd" are not attractive. Delete.
I am nice guy that likes to avoid drama - Delete. Guys that say they are "nice guys" usually aren't.
if u want to know more about me please send me a message :) - Delete. Women already know to contact you if they are interested. Don't use "u" for "you". It makes you look like a teenager.
Write about your goals and ambitions in life. Do you want to settle down and raise a family? Travel the world? Be the biggest nerd in the world? What do you want to do?
Write a paragraph about the woman you'd like to meet. | |
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| How to make my profile better
Posted: 11/5/2009 5:05:07 PM | | Thanks for the tips, I don't have many pictures of myself, so I only have these ones that my friend sent me. Bit I will try to edit them to not show alcohol. | |
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