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roborider

Joined: 10/13/2009
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ok review me... jsut need to know Posted: 11/5/2009 7:21:25 AM
always had troubles with this sort of thing maybe i need a girl too write one up. i just want to know am i in the ball park? or just come off as some scary dude lookin for action? shoot away all comments expected..

HalftimeDad

Joined: 5/29/2005
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ok review me... jsut need to know Posted: 11/5/2009 7:29:24 AM
No. You're not in the ball park - you aren't even on the road to the game. Take a look at your thumbnail here - we can see a nose, a mouth and a chin. Would you click on that? You have very, very little in your profile; yet you seem to have more spelling errors than I've seen in recent memory. Spell check won't even catch many of them since you use "too" wherever "to" is called for. None of your pics show you in a good light. One 4X4 pic is fine - a whole gallery of them is obsessive. Smile, get in good light and get a friend to take a photo. Then do it again somewhere else with different clothes. Repeat. Try to come up with something about you that a woman would find attractive, then write it on a piece of paper. Repeat. Do that half a dozen times, then write out a profile long hand based on this. Only then should you approach a keyboard.

Lion_of_Ireland

Joined: 10/28/2008
Msg: 3

ok review me... jsut need to know Posted: 11/5/2009 8:05:23 AM
Highlight, capitalize and put in bold that you love CUDDLING. Make it the first thing they read about you! Maybe go into some of your cuddling techniques, in the jeep, couch, bed and such. Expansion can go along way. =) Seperate your interests with commas I am no spelling nazi, but yers is horrible, and I mean really bad to the point it is unreadable. Did you write it on your blackberry in 2 minutes flat? You have a very attractive lower face as your main picture. Maybe it is just me though. Nice chin BTW, I may have to try that. I would scrap this thing and try again.

luvnlife2

Joined: 12/17/2006
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ok review me... jsut need to know Posted: 11/5/2009 8:36:57 AM
I would scrap this thing and try again. Yes, unfortunatley that's what you need to do.

ron5000

Joined: 8/13/2008
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ok review me... jsut need to know Posted: 11/6/2009 6:32:36 PM
Your current main photo does not meet the site rule and could get deleted.

You go first

Joined: 5/1/2008
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ok review me... jsut need to know Posted: 11/6/2009 7:27:33 PM
Hey, PoCo! I get that you're an active guy looking for someone to come along for the ride, but this profile feels almost geared (pun intended) toward a buddy. Except for the cuddling thing. You need to break it up into a few smaller paragraphs (like I've done here) and expand on some of your activities and hobbies. Where is it you go quadding? Stave Lake? Strawberry Island? Does your work allow you to have weekends off? Do your kids live with you? Are you open to a lady with younger kids? Do you have any pets? Throw in a line or two about what kind of 'flower' you'd like to meet. Someone who has at least 2 pairs of jeans that aren't 'designer' jeans? Someone with a current fishing licence? Have a little fun with this!

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