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Posted: 11/5/2009 4:59:51 PM | | What message is my profile Reflecting. Does it scare Women away ?I send out plenty of messages , I'm assuming the Ladies are reading my profile , I'm seeing a lot of read/ deleted or Just no response at all. Help. | |
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Posted: 11/5/2009 5:07:26 PM | | The hair!!!!! You should get a profesional hair cut. | |
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Posted: 11/5/2009 5:42:10 PM | | I appreciate the honest response. Thank you | |
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Posted: 11/5/2009 5:59:22 PM | Try getting better pictures. Even the second one is marginally better. Get some lighter, clearer shots and throw a full body shot in.
I liked your profile - space it out between paragraphs because one large body of text is rather daunting.
I know that it's a bit pedantic, but yes, a haircut would be good. Trim the sides short.. it will look heaps better - trust me. | |
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Posted: 11/5/2009 6:07:13 PM | | Exellent advice. Thankyou. | |
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Posted: 11/5/2009 6:12:47 PM | | Since you are a smoker, there'll be a large percentage of women that will pass you over. | |
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Posted: 11/5/2009 6:26:50 PM | | the women are right about the pics. You might find something in the profile writing tips. There are over 20 I's in your profile text, many lead paragraphs. | |
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Posted: 11/5/2009 6:28:33 PM | I don’t know, I like your hair like it is. After spending years around military bases and I now work with guys with short hair, yours is refreshing.
I would make the blue shirted picture your primary, you look much better in it and you’re smiling. More pictures are needed and will help.
You are a good looking guy but you smoke. That is one of the first things I look at and I’m pretty sure I am not the only one. That cuts the pool down right away, some women (who don’t smoke) will work around it, but most won’t.
You can tell this was written from the heart, and there is nothing wrong with that because it shows honesty. You sound like a very sincere, thoughtful guy.
“I spend half my life in my work cloths.” I would get rid of this, makes it sound like you come home from work and never change out of them.
I would look at the punctuation and spelling, break it up a bit more with spaces between the paragraphs and you should be good. Good luck! | |
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