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Posted: 11/6/2009 8:12:06 AM | Good Morning Everyone!
I hope that some you will take some time to provide some constructive help and comments to help me find my Allie Hamilton,,, Aka from THE NOTEBOOK... I know that there is that special woman out there and want to make sure she sees my best foot forward!
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Posted: 11/6/2009 8:39:53 AM | I actually like your profile the way it is. it really shows how you are as a person and what you are looking for. a few more pics wouldn't hurt but overall, i think you did a good job....
happy fishing..... | |
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Posted: 11/6/2009 8:46:57 AM | Hi
Not bad at all. I am sure others will have more to add. The one thing that stuck out is this sentence:
I like outgoing assertive [starting off plural] woman [singular] that are secure of themselves [plural again], who knows what she wants and is willing to go and get it [back to singular], knows how to carry [still singular] themselves [and back to plural] in public."
So either:
I like outgoing, assertive women that are secure (hmm, don't really like that either) of themselves, who know what they want and are willing to go and get it, and who know how to carry themselves in public.
Or:
I like an outgoing, assertive woman who is sure of herself, knows what she wants and is willing to go (the extra mile?) and get it, and knows how to carry herself in public.
Coming to thing of it I'd reword the whole sentence as I don't like it either way.
"My match is an outgoing, confident woman who knows what she wants, and how to get it. She is sociable and knows how to carry herself in public." Still not liking it, but perhaps you can fix it yourself? Sorry, not much of a help this morning :s . | |
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Posted: 11/6/2009 8:53:28 AM | Good afternoon!
Okay, well, this is going to be advice from someone less than half your age, but if I said what you said in your first paragraph and put that in my profile, I think a lot of women would get scared off by that, just cause I'm showing a sign of what people might think looks like neediness. You'll need to build attraction in a woman, I believe. Then comes affection. If you want a secure and assertive woman, she'll probably want the same out of you.
What I would personally do in your shoes is suggest taking her out to dinner. Order a nice****ail (I'd recommend a Blue Hawaiian, it tastes great!) and just be really suave and debonair. I think that's something you'd be able to put in your "First Date" section, to give them an idea of what you're all about. If you're talking to a woman for the first time and you let her decide what the first date idea should be, she'll probably get the wrong idea, and it probably won't be perfect.
I think first dates are more of a time to get to know the other person better. It doesn't have to be perfect. I think coffee shops are great, just cause you're meeting them for the first time. Oh, for great ideas on first dates, watch the show "Blind Date" for do's and don'ts. | |
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