| Can you lovely like minded people give me a review please.
Posted: 11/6/2009 4:57:45 PM | Thank you in advance for looking at this post.
I have just edited my profile and I would like to know your views on if its good, bad or down right sleezy.
This is the first time I have actually given online sites ago as I have always felt rather awkward meeting people online but I guess you have got to try sometime once in your life so what the heck.
Many thanks again I look forward to your comments.
Martin | |
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| Can you lovely like minded people give me a review please.
Posted: 11/6/2009 5:48:02 PM | It's not bad.
It gets across an impression of a real human being. You seem successful, ambitious and genuine in your desire to meet someone special.
I'd drop "Petite" as an adjective - seems a little feminine. Movie Star size would be better. | |
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| Can you lovely like minded people give me a review please.
Posted: 11/6/2009 7:35:26 PM | Gonna give you a bad time, here.
This line: I am self confident and hate those who are ignorant, those who do not look past the looks and see people for who they actually are. is grossly contradicted by your detailed description of a curvy sexy lady with eyes that make you weak. (correct the spelling of 'weak') Delete the sentence that says who you hate - it's too negative for this profile and makes you look judgmental. Then, you can keep in the sentence about the sexy curvy babes.
Insurance Brokerage owners need to know how to play golf in Canada. It's the law. They also need to know how to 'do lunch'. It's a dirty job,.... Good luck to you on that adventure, too. | |
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| Can you lovely like minded people give me a review please.
Posted: 11/7/2009 7:05:42 AM | Thank you for your comments, I will amend.
As for the golf in Canada, it seems like a long way to travel to just hit a ball around with a club as i am in the UK :). But i know what you mean.
Cheers again for your help.
Martin | |
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| Can you lovely like minded people give me a review please.
Posted: 11/7/2009 10:00:45 AM | doh! I got caught in a grammar warp. Insurance brokers in Canada have to play golf. I must have been decaffeinated... Nice catch, though.
OK, Martin, now delete the age restrictions and photo requirement in your email settings. A "successful" woman is not likely to be 18, but one with a great attitude may write you. So far as the photos - many really great women here have no main photo posted for a variety of legitimate reasons, but have private images to share. You may be pleasantly surprised! | |
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