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Posted: 11/7/2009 12:38:35 AM | I changed my profile for the 3rd time and I am still getting the same results.
Is it the point form profile? my pictures? I need some help
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Posted: 11/7/2009 12:57:14 AM | Pictures are great, not a stupid sunset anywhere.
Poof read: it's "not mind" not "notmind"
You like hockey soccer football etc. would that be playing or just watching on TV? We women love to watch you men play sports but typically hate to watch you watch sports.
You may want to clarify that!
Please put a space after every comma otherwise it looks like you are too lazy to care about the details.
Other than that I don't see anything particularly wrong with it but then again I'm not in my 20's anymore and god only knows what the 20 something women want these days. | |
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Posted: 11/7/2009 1:00:26 AM | | Oh hang on, one more thing...your opening line is really negative. Rethink that one and try to say the same thing in a positive tone. Or nuke it altogether and say something else. | |
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Posted: 11/7/2009 6:01:00 AM | A couple of things to think about. You are a good looking young guy with good photos but on that primary photo you want that close-up so that people can actually see that smile in the thumbnail.
I am not a fan of the list style profile, you might want to think about how you could say these things in an interesting paragraph format and have that ready if this does not produce results for you.
Get rid of the negatives such as the following.
-I hate girls that play games and create drama.
-I always try and stay away from drama or anything stressful.
Those people do not even understand they are creating drama (usually) and negative comments can turn off the others. Better to determine that in your dating.
Suggest a first date plan, makes you seem like you have balls you know. You can always change that once you get to that point.
All the best,
Ron | |
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Posted: 11/7/2009 12:35:07 PM | In addition to the great suggestions you've already been given, a closer up head/shoulders shot is always helpful. More photos are appreciated to give a picture of what you're like. Skip the cellphone-in-the-bathroom-mirror shots and the webcam photos, they very rarely are flattering.
What's the next place you want to visit? Put that in your Interests field.
Agreed about the negative lines. Also - delete the 'not picky' stuff - that just says "I'll date anyone".
Do you like your job? Is there anything positive you can say about it? Women like to know if you're happy in your work, or if this is something you're doing until you figure out what you want to be when you grow up.
If you're going to keep the list, try and inject a little more light humour.
What do your introductory messages look like? Are you keeping them light, casual and short? Are you mentioning something specific from her profile? Asking only one question? If you want to try a practice version, feel free to use my profile as a test sample and send me a typical message for additional comment. No charge. | |
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