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Posted: 11/7/2009 6:41:00 AM | Hey guys, I have just up dated my profile and now I'm after some feed back on it. I've checked the spelling and grammer, these being my weak point, can any one see any thing I missed? Also I added a "what I'm looking for" paragraph, is this good enough?
As always your input is greatly recieved.
Thanks, Jim | |
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| does this cut the mustard??
Posted: 11/7/2009 6:45:44 AM | | over all i think it sounds fine :) there are still some spelling mistakes tho, and youve written "the" twice on the third sentance. good luck!. | |
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| does this cut the mustard??
Posted: 11/7/2009 8:46:51 AM | ('Sentence' is the correct spelling btw)
OP not bad.. I feel the main pic is a bit 'forced' but at least it's clear and shows your face well.
Please change this
enenjoy
To Enjoy..
That's it :) | |
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| does this cut the mustard??
Posted: 11/7/2009 10:06:12 AM | Hi, Jim - you sound like you have a great attitude. The difficulty you may find here is the same as in 'real life' - when you're in the military, they move you around quite a bit. It will be difficult to find a lady who is comfortable with you being away months at a time. Is this typical for you?
If you've been in the service now since you were 18, will you be able to stay in one place soon? It will be hard for a lady to feel she should invest emotionally in someone who may be transferred or away a lot. If you are comfortable with it, could you add a line or two in your profile dealing with that concern? | |
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