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 BlondArtist

Joined: 10/29/2009
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Give it to me straight doc, am I going to live?
Posted: 11/7/2009 11:15:07 AM
Hey there fellow POF fishers.
I've been here over a week or so and already my skin is thicker. I want to fix up my profile page and make it shine, preffably with a luminous glow exuding sexiness, and dashing appeal. I'm pretty much willing to rennovate the whole thing, even the headline.

Are the picturs cheesy? Should I ditch the beloved pumpkin? What's lame and what's good? Lay it on me thick and truthfully. No sense it keeping something that doesn't do what it is supposed to right?

Thanks a bunch,
BA
 js09

Joined: 10/14/2009
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Posted: 11/7/2009 11:41:17 AM
Get all new pictures and SMILE!!!

You seem like a smart guy... Give it time
 planher1

Joined: 9/30/2009
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Posted: 11/7/2009 11:41:45 AM
Okay well my opinion on your profile is that is kind of all over the place and nondescript. I think you should elaborate a little more...be specific about your interest. The part about your job is to vague and doesn't really say anything. I think the pics are a little cheesy and should showcase the things you are into. The pumpkin just has to go! lol I just went through a review of mine and took all opinions into consideration and revamped mine and I think it is much better. The main photo is to far away....you can't see your face at all and I think people will move on and not read your profile because of that. Just a few things to think about!
 You go first

Joined: 5/1/2008
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Posted: 11/7/2009 12:10:57 PM
Username/headline are fine.
Main photo needs to be up close and smiling, but keep the rest in the gallery EXCEPT the cellphone self-portraits in the bathroom mirror. Oops... I think that just leaves the beloved pumpkin! Pass the damn camera to a friend.

Your Interests are really cool, but you don't elaborate on them in the profile. Dragon boat racing!? Talk about an upper body workout.

The phrase in your thread about the luminous glow etc. is actually more descriptive and telling of your personality and sense of humour than your whole profile! That's the kind of writing that will engage your viewer's imagination.
 BlondArtist

Joined: 10/29/2009
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Posted: 11/8/2009 4:10:21 PM
Thanks for the great feedback. Its much appretiated :)
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