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Slimboyfat79

Joined: 7/12/2009
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Review my profile pleese Posted: 11/7/2009 12:56:26 PM
hello and thanks for taking the time to read my first post on here.. I have been on this site now for about 6 months, and my reply rate is well!!.. pants.. I dont take dating websites too seriously, But would be nice if i had some more first contacts, and even more replys even.. but seriously is it my profile or what, I even had a look at other guys profiles and i think mine has a bit more too offer or am i wrong?! also I know I'm not a Brad Pitt or the like im not the bad surly.. so I am open to any suggestions good or bad male or female to enhance my messages I receive on here.. go on have a look!!

Irish Eyez

Joined: 12/30/2008
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Review my profile pleese Posted: 11/7/2009 1:31:15 PM
A much better photo would be best when it comes to a main pic. One that's a close-up and with a SMILE, as the one you have now is simply just too serious and you look downright grumpy. Few women when seeing the main pic you have now, will want to click on your profile. Lose it ( main pic ) as I don't think it's conducive to your selling yourself. This: I don't bite, well not hard anyway!!! God, if I had a dollar for each time I read that on profiles! Lose that phrase, too... it's so over done and terribly cliche! Your profile states you're looking for good friends, yet you want to 'date'. Which is it? You're far better off stating 'dating' as many women are on this site to do just that!

Melangell

Joined: 8/3/2009
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Review my profile pleese Posted: 11/7/2009 3:58:43 PM
Hey there The first thing that stumped me was you username. Slimboyfat. Which is it? But, OK, nevermind that..... You are indeed quite cute! Why don't you work it? The previous poster was right - you definitetly look grumpy in that photo. Also I don't want to turn my head sideways just to see you in your main image. Get one that is a well lit headshot of you with a bright smile. I bet your smile is a killer! Occupation "I work" is a huge turn off! For crying out loud, write what you do! Women will want to know they don't have a smoocher on their hands while dating you. Though, not thou. Thou shalt check thine grammar and spelling! It helps to have a neat and clean profile. What aspirations? Can you elaborate just a wee bit? Not only on them, but also on what you like to do. Your profile doesn't give us much hard facts about you - it's all very mysterious. Some mystery is good, but we don't want to be detectives trying to get to know you. Give us SOMEthing! "I do have a son from a previous relationship I see him weekends so also my ideal women will also have to accept I love my son." It doesn't sound right, can you reword that? Something like: "My X year old son is my world. We love to xyz on the weekends that I have him." Good luck and happy fishing!

rjm514

Joined: 10/31/2009
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Review my profile pleese Posted: 11/7/2009 9:27:48 PM
Plenty to go on there, good work ladies! I think it's possible Mr. Slimboyfat likes a bit of Fatboy Slim :D

Browngreeneyes

Joined: 12/21/2008
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Review my profile pleese Posted: 11/7/2009 9:29:32 PM
whoa on the main pic.. you look like you're saying 'wtf'. Try some better pics that don't age you, as you are looking older than 30 in these pics Ditch the pic of your kid.. it's just not right to put him in your profile.

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