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Posted: 11/7/2009 2:24:56 PM | | I am new on here as you can see my start date. I have just posted up to date photos. I have basically said everything I am into and like. What else do I need to do. I am definitely not a smooth talker when it comes to women.. I prefer action to words..and not that kinda action,lol! Any tips would be appreciated!! ~ Kyle | |
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Posted: 11/7/2009 2:39:50 PM | Pics and profile look good to me.
You have quite a lot of email restrictions which may limit your options, particularly the distance and the "must not have emailed users looking for intimate encounters". It's possible to do this by mistake and the mark on your a/c never goes away.
People also change with time. You don't know why someone was looking for an IE and their wants may now have changed.
Good luck fishing | |
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Posted: 11/7/2009 2:54:51 PM | | Very true, I just didn't want anyone to think I was looking for one night stands!! Thanks for the reply! | |
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Posted: 11/7/2009 3:25:06 PM | Hey Kyle!
Pictures: The first three are a wee bit repetitive. Also, while the main image is a good headshot of you, could you perhaps crack a wee smile? Smiles work wonders! The fourth and fifth pictures are great as they show you in action. Not so sure I like the last one. You look so much older and kind of unhappy in it....
I love the fact that you have donated your hair to locks of love! That was/is a very kind thing to do and even women who don't like long hair will hopefully be able to appreciate that. The rest of the content is pretty nice. What I am missing though is a few words about what you are looking for.
There are quite a few sentences in your profile that start with "I". Could you rearrange them a bit? Also, I suggest to write it all up in a word processor and running a spell and grammar check before cut and pasting it here. No worries, your profile is not that bad, but it would smooth out a few bumps here and there.
Overall I quite like it! Good luck and happy fishing! | |
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Posted: 11/8/2009 10:03:13 AM | OK, profile has been revised =) I ditched the long hair shot. Revamped the body of my profile to reduce the use of "I". I still need to add a few different shots of me, but I just took those three your talking about yesterday,lol. So, take another look. I really appreciate your input and help, THANK YOU!  | |
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Posted: 11/8/2009 10:42:02 AM | How many children do you have? What are their ages and do they live with you?
Write a paragraph about the woman you'd like to meet. | |
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Posted: 11/8/2009 11:45:13 AM | I'm so sorry I missed the 'long hair' shot... (sigh)
I agree ^^ What ages are your kids? preteens? teenagers? toddlers? That will be important to a lady with a child(ren) of her own.
I got the sense that you worked full time, played bass guitar and were into a lot of sports. Do you want a lady that will fit into your schedule, or are you willing to shift some of your focus to make time with her? It's great to be active, but how will you fit a partner into that? Doesn't necessarily have to be spelled out in the profile, but you could mention some activities that you'd like to do with a partner. Travel? Road trips? Back deck + blanket + wine + stargazing? You figure it out. | |
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Posted: 11/8/2009 5:07:50 PM | Ok, more revisions. I think I have it all narrowed down, but more input is always helpful.  Heck, I've changed my profile each time someone has mentioned something new!! lol. Thanks for the help!! | |
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