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Posted: 11/7/2009 3:00:02 PM | I just would like someone to review and comment on the quality of my profile
I had it hidden for about a month, but would like to get back into it!
I would just like to know about what I could add, change or delete to make it better
Any hints, tips and help would be great :) | |
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| :) Review?
Posted: 11/7/2009 3:13:03 PM | Hey
I really like your profile. It is nicely written and gives me a good idea of who you are. I had to laugh at your "biggest turn off". Nicely put! :)
The only thing I was not too happy with was your row of photos. The main image, while nice, is shot in such a way that it attracts attention to your cleavage. You were miffed at the fact that people emailed you for an intimate encounter. Could it be that picture that invited them?
In most of your pictures you have that weird pouty thing with your mouth going on. What's up with that? One of those is ok, but four? And I am not crazy about the one with you and your friend. It's off center and that firehydrant is distracting.
Yet again, aside from the pictures I think your profile is nice. I wish you good luck and happy fishing! | |
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Posted: 11/7/2009 3:22:12 PM | Hi Olivia…I liked it to…light and breezy and happy is what I came away with. AND articulate....liked the headline live, love, learn, etc. a LOT!
Like the poster above, I thought the photos needed improving. A few more suggestions:
1) You’re a very pretty girl, so do a nice smile in the primary.
2) Do a nice smile in some of your other photos, too!
3) Smiles are more approachable and most of your photos have so-so smiles or non-smiles.
4) You might leave off the “gay rights” for now…too many men associate that with bi-sexual women.
5) You have yourself listed as “a few extra pounds”…you don’t look like a few extra, but it’s hard to tell with the coat on. Here you might be “average”….but that’s your call.
6) I’d post a full bod photo without a coat….and without a child in the photo. You list no kids, but most guys do the photos FIRST and then start reading.
7) Monroe….ya might put in parentheses that it’s the above the lip piercing….or he might wonder if it’s waaaaay lower….just sayin! LOL.
Hope that helps. Best to you here and in your career. Teaching is the BEST! :DenverSky5280  | |
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