| What impression do I make?
Posted: 11/7/2009 4:32:53 PM | Hi everyone,
I have edited my profile several times and I was wondering if you could tell me what type of impression it makes on the people reading it..
Im hoping that it is not to wordy and just gets to the point without sounding too blah!
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| What impression do I make?
Posted: 11/7/2009 4:50:49 PM | Hey there!
I really like your pictures! Well done!
Could you elaborate a bit more on who you are? For example, you teach music. Do you like being a teacher, and why? What kind of books do you like to read? "Outdoors" is very broad. What do you like to do when you are outdoors?
"I have Yahoo IM..if you would like to chat send me an email!" - Delete that. Comes across as needy. If somebody emails you and you feel like there could be something, you can still offer them your private email/IM. The rest is nice, and not too wordy at all.
Happy fishing!! | |
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| What impression do I make?
Posted: 11/7/2009 5:22:55 PM | | Looks good to me, but I stink at profile reviews anyway. I just wanted to say "go Buckeyes." Awesome game today:) | |
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| What impression do I make?
Posted: 11/7/2009 6:10:46 PM | Looks good to me, awesome photos!!
BTW the 1st two ladies to comment are great reviewers, so you are good to go!!
All the best
Ron | |
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| What impression do I make?
Posted: 11/8/2009 12:33:19 AM | Well...you're an OSU fan...that's a turnoff...for me at least.
However, I like how you smiles in all your photos and I think your photos are the strongest part of your profile.
The written part is pretty good, but I find it lacking some "action" words that makes me want to write you a message i.e. Why should I send you a message and not the other girls? What makes you different than other girls?
Hope that helps.. | |
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