|Maybe add a few spaces in your 'about me' section as its all squashed together at the moment and when people first see that some really can't be dealing with reading it.|
Lose all the negative lines like..
Though I'm not very good,
I'm not paticularly unique
I dont personally think that I'm a very unique individual.
If you tell people your not a unique person then your giving them no good reason to want to talk to you.
And everyone is unique in their own way try to show people that some how.
once I get all my finances straight.
And I would say change your main picture, your second picture would be much much better as your main.