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 Occasus
Joined: 11/16/2009
Msg: 1
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So I've come to the conclusion that either I'm completely uniteresting or I'm terribly unattractive.
Regardless something about my profile makes people say, "Nope, not talkin to this guy!"
So give me some honest brutal feedback as to why noone has sent me any messages and why noone will return the ones I send.
 jus01
Joined: 11/17/2009
Msg: 2
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Posted: 11/23/2009 3:12:41 AM
Maybe add a few spaces in your 'about me' section as its all squashed together at the moment and when people first see that some really can't be dealing with reading it.
Lose all the negative lines like..

Though I'm not very good,


I'm not paticularly unique


I dont personally think that I'm a very unique individual.

If you tell people your not a unique person then your giving them no good reason to want to talk to you.
And everyone is unique in their own way try to show people that some how.

once I get all my finances straight.


And I would say change your main picture, your second picture would be much much better as your main.
 PrimalTranquillity
Joined: 11/11/2007
Msg: 3
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Posted: 11/23/2009 9:38:40 AM
You're not very unique, hence you're not very interesting - brutal truth, and you said it yourself. So definitely get rid of that. Otherwise two major issues that I see:
"Not even sure what city I'd like to go to." - you must decide or not mention it at all, who wants to start anything with you knowing that you can't decide where you'll be soon. Anything wishy-washy just has to go.

Also: you have Talk/Email as your Looking For setting. Just be upfront about it and say Dating. Don't say Long-Term, it's too serious for your age, but Dating makes your intent clear - with Talk/Email you might want to "cozy up" to the person first, flirt, etc, and then ask them out - but who are you kidding, at the end of hte day this is a dating site and you are here to find a date, so no need to be ambiguous about it.
 MsStackhouse
Joined: 5/20/2009
Msg: 4
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Posted: 11/23/2009 9:48:06 AM
OMG! You're like, 12! What are you doing here? Go out and have some fun!
 Occasus
Joined: 11/16/2009
Msg: 5
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Posted: 11/23/2009 2:32:30 PM
Alright, I've added a few changes to my profile.
Changed my main pic.
Deleted anything wishy-washy or negative.
and changed my thingy to Dating.

And I tried the whole going out and having fun thing tracy. when I was 16 I hitchhiked around the country. Now I work 48 to 60 hour weeks all night shift. I dont have time to go out and have fun really.

Thanks for your reveiws!
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