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 RIVEROGUE
Joined: 5/18/2010
Msg: 1
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What did I do good on and what should I improve? Do I talk to much about my pastimes? Should I write more about my professional aspirations? What can I do to make more women open my profile? What about my pics? Is there anything else that I can improve on?
 The_Standard_Model
Joined: 7/14/2007
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How's my profile?
Posted: 5/27/2010 11:05:05 PM
You do well on the second paragraph. Do not change a thing there. The rest is garbage. Dump it all.

How do you get women to open up your profile? Do not use a picture of you making a goofy face as your profile pic. Get a more flattering picture (with your mouth closed and comb your hair). You are a good looking guy. Show it.


I am looking for a real relationship and I want to get married someday. I'm a very active outdoorsy guy, strong LDS, and a strong quiet type. I'm looking for a kind and active girlfriend that wants to join me in my outdoor adventures, dates in the city, and just cuddling on the couch in front of a movie while we eat dinner. I am an affectionate guy and loves holding hands. I served an LDS mission and am a veteran. I am a driven and goal oriented. Although I'm not working, I'm pretty busy going to UVU under a 9 semester long full-ride scholarship (majoring in Geology.)

I am an affectionate person. I love holding hands and wish that when I have a girlfriend or a wife that I can hold hands with her when we go places, even if it's just going grocery shopping. I like cuddling on the couch when watching movies, or holding each other in the kitchen while preparing dinner. That's how it was in my last marriage and I miss that. I am not looking for someone to have sex with. I am a chaste person and have too much respect than to abuse the sacredness of chastity.

You know what all of this says to the reader? It says that you are desperate. It says to run like hell!! It says that you do not seem to understand that the point here is to find a person that you enjoy being with. You seem to want to find a person to resume a relationship with. You tell us next to nothing about you that is social (becuase dating has little to do with your schooling or job. The very things that you go into detail about). You say noext to nothing about the sort of women that you want to meet other than she should be active and like the outdoors. It sounds completely desperate from top to bottom. You need to relax. Dating is a process. You need to complete the process before you get a relationship.


I have considered myself a quiet person, but I have found recently that in dating I am the one who has always been the most open and talkative. I talk during first dates, but I try harder to get her to talk about herself. I like listening.

Do not whine about how you have to carry the conversation. It does not look good.
 Ambrosiax
Joined: 5/18/2010
Msg: 3
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Posted: 5/28/2010 1:05:49 AM

I am looking for a real relationship and I want to get married someday.

Don't we all?

I'm a very active outdoorsy guy, strong LDS, and a strong quiet type. I'm looking for a kind and active girlfriend that wants to join me in my outdoor adventures, dates in the city, and just cuddling on the couch in front of a movie while we eat dinner.

what is LDS? Also, isn't it hard to be cuddling, watching a movie and eating at the same time? Sounds clingy, my running shoes is just about on.
[quote I am an affectionate guy and loves holding hands.

I am an affectionate person. I love holding hands and wish that when I have a girlfriend or a wife that I can hold hands with her when we go places
even if it's just going grocery shopping.

WTF?? Are you a child? Are you afraid of getting lost? Do you know how hard it is to be holding hands whilst doing the groceries? I supposed you're too busy holding hands that the woman is left pushing the trolley.
[quote I like cuddling on the couch when watching movies, or holding each other in the kitchen while preparing dinner.
Oh my god, we get it, you like cuddling and holding hands.

I am not looking for someone to have sex with.

Then what are you looking for? So you're after a relationship without the sex? stuff that!

I am a chaste person and have too much respect than to abuse the sacredness of chastity.

Meaning? A woman is going to be stuck with you and she's not getting sex. Wow

Do what Miles suggests and ditch everything and start afresh.
 KhattyKat
Joined: 4/15/2010
Msg: 4
How's my profile?
Posted: 5/28/2010 5:42:52 PM
Hi, I thought I would put in some ideas for you, I agree with the previous posts. you need a decent main pic, something a bit more natural.
I would get rid of the two paragraphs below, they are just small talk and woman will loose interest. Plus please do the spell check, other than that you have a decent profile. Happy fishing.

I am an affectionate person. I love holding hands and wish that when I have a girlfriend or a wife that I can hold hands with her when we go places, even if it's just going grocery shopping. I like cuddling on the couch when watching movies, or holding each other in the kitchen while preparing dinner. That's how it was in my last marriage and I miss that. I am not looking for someone to have sex with. I am a chaste person and have too much respect than to abuse the sacredness of chastity.

I have considered myself a quiet person, but I have found recently that in dating I am the one who has always been the most open and talkative. I talk during first dates, but I try harder to get her to talk about herself. I like listening.
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