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|So I thought I should get some feedback to see how I come across, so what do you guys think of my profile? You know making profiles is the hardest thing to do if you're not gifted with words.Haha But there's no reason I can't leave a good impression anyway.|
And please be honest. :-)
Posted: 8/26/2011 8:36:05 PM
|The advice I'm going to give is very generic advice (coming from a writer that is) but I feel it would really help you so:|
Go to your word processor (not plenty of fish) and write a really, really long profile. Produce as many words as you possibly can. Then cut out the vast majority of it, leaving only the very best parts, that not only describe you well, but make you seem interesting.
Its not that any of your profile is BAD, it's just that it's not as good as I feel it could be. Making it as good as it could be will require more time and effort on your part.
You already know this but I want to say it anyway:
I may be a writer, but I can't write your profile for you because I don't know you.
Posted: 8/27/2011 2:21:05 AM
|Honestly, I think this profile is cool. Just cut out the part about "Disney World." Some chick might think you're soft or something |
Posted: 2/10/2012 7:16:04 AM
|Back with a new profile. Seeking honest opinions on the content, flow, etc. Especially from the ladies but you guys can comment too.|
Posted: 2/10/2012 9:28:54 AM
Let's break the ice
With a polar bear? An ice pick?
If I can't get away without a full body shot Gem neither can you. So you need one.
Enjoyed the read though flow came through nicely about the kind of guy you are and personality you have.
Posted: 2/10/2012 6:52:21 PM
|Thank you. I'll see if I have a full body pic I can find.|
Posted: 2/10/2012 7:39:57 PM
|It looked fine to me but I'd change your main picture, the lighting is not good and you are a little hard to see.|