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 sweet man
Joined: 8/7/2010
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ok ladies i have totally redone my profile except the pic i know the pic is and old one i will put up a new one when i get one so tell me if u would date me based on my profile if not tell me what i need to change and be honest
 Phenomenally43
Joined: 7/16/2011
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Posted: 8/31/2011 4:14:04 PM
Dear Charles,
I work with LD adults and thought I would help you out a bit. I read your profile and wrote it over to say the things I think you meant, in a clear way. Please do not think that I mean any harm because I just want to help. I wish you all luck & happiness!

Rona

Hello Ladies…My Name is Charles. I’m a little shy but a really nice guy once you get to know me. I don’t talk a lot because I am busy listening to what you have to say. I think that’s important. I am a true Southern Gentleman and try to be thoughtful and gentle with other people. I enjoy most foods and being a true Southerner I love football…The Dallas Cowboys and Texas Longhorns are my two favorite teams. I wonder what you like?

I am mildly learning disabled, but like Forrest Gump, “I know what Love is”... In my opinion, that was one of the best love stories of all times and really showed the deep feeling that people with disabilities have and all that we have to give. I am smart in many ways, but I don’t write well, so talking on the phone would be best for me.

I would like to find a gentle woman who is kind and gracious. I am not a drinker but don’t mind if you do, just not too much. I don’t smoke and prefer that you don’t either. I am a friendly person and get on well with kids. I don’t want anyone who doesn’t treat others well and is playing games.

I am sincerely seeking a relationship and hope that you will find me to be someone you’d like to know. I had some help writing this, but we all need a little help from time to time, don't we?
 Phenomenally43
Joined: 7/16/2011
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Posted: 8/31/2011 4:15:28 PM
I do think a better picture would be good to have. Maybe you have a friend with a camera & can get some pictures of you doing fun things that a lady would like. I like to see a man being active or smiling.

Have fun!
 sweet man
Joined: 8/7/2010
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Posted: 9/2/2011 11:01:52 AM
thanks rona for the advice i wrote it the way u posted it and thanks again
 Irish Eyez
Joined: 12/30/2008
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Posted: 9/2/2011 1:47:33 PM
Your profile is one LOOOONG sentence. Where's the periods? Where's the capitals and "I," when it comes to the personal pronoun? You need to rethink your strategy when it comes to punctuation, grammar etc. Women DO like to see that a man's placed considerable effort into his profile.

Same with the pic - where's the effort? Get a much better pic - in fact, get PICS! ( Plural )

Women take a second to see a man's thumbnail pic and it's it's not up to snuff, you're passes by quickly!
 SpringsDiver
Joined: 7/2/2011
Msg: 6
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Posted: 9/2/2011 4:59:29 PM

Dear Charles,
I work with LD adults and thought I would help you out a bit. I read your profile and wrote it over to say the things I think you meant, in a clear way. Please do not think that I mean any harm because I just want to help. I wish you all luck & happiness!

Rona



^^^ Rona is such a sweetheart!!

Thank you, Rona. I hope Charles can get your version pasted into his profile.

Charles...Let me know if I can help in any way. I hope you find someone special/ You sound like a very nice man.
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