| | It Says Creative WritingPage 1 of 1 | little bit of creative writing my way, some lyrics i dropped yesterday.
Let me know what you think,
March in the night
I’m beyond all sight
I’m the sickest individual
This side of Friday night
And I really don’t care
So I don’t fight fair
And I’m tooled to the nines
Every time I rhyme
See the problem is that all
These little writers
Think it’s easy to just get lyrical
But I don’t really think that
There’s a way I can say
This without being cynical
Your shit mate you really are
Just give it up and walk away
And right now there’s only one thing to do
And that’s show you the way I play
See I don’t tip toe around a track
I go ahead and just dive right in,
And when I do this I can always feel the beat
That’s the main reason why I win,
You’re a slow poke kidda,
A pink pokemon
If you carry on
Your gonna end up gone | |
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| It Says Creative Writing
Posted: 2/11/2012 5:38:15 PM | | It sucks. But don't fell bad, thats just my opinion. I would wait until I got a few more negative reviews before I started feeling bad. | |
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| It Says Creative Writing
Posted: 2/12/2012 5:29:04 AM | | My son that is 18 writes inspirational short stories that are really good do you know where I could send them to get them recognized. | |
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| It Says Creative Writing
Posted: 2/21/2012 8:23:37 AM | | If there is a writer's guild in your area, you could try there for reviews. Or go to your local library and ask, they are usually helpful. | |
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