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 bondiboy49
Joined: 3/15/2011
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ive had a few girls suspect im a player ...without even meeting me ... which couldnt be further from the truth ...is that what my profile implies ...is there any way i should change it ??
 MTJD1990
Joined: 8/23/2011
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Posted: 2/19/2012 9:26:32 AM
The way you type with all lowercase and lots of ..... those is consistent with 18-19 year old's.

If your trying to attact educated middle aged women then it gives a poor impression.
 Lionessx
Joined: 9/26/2011
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Posted: 2/19/2012 12:35:39 PM

The way you type with all lowercase and lots of ..... those is consistent with 18-19 year old's.

If your trying to attact educated middle aged women then it gives a poor impression.


MTJD is right about typing all in lowercase and it does give a poor impression and to some it represents laziness.


first date ???...well i would say a meeting somewhere like a cafe or by the riverside would be nice ...perhaps followed by a romantic candle lit bath with rose petals and glass of wine or champagne ....hehe ..AND YES OF COURSE IM FANTASIZING ...i ran out of rose petals ages ago !! ... lol


This is probably why women think you are a player. Candle lit baths on a first date Maybe after a few dates BUT never on a first date.
 bondiboy49
Joined: 3/15/2011
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Posted: 2/19/2012 12:41:07 PM
i thought that was obviously non serious ..but i take your point ...lol
 Lionessx
Joined: 9/26/2011
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Posted: 2/19/2012 1:28:10 PM
I am glad you got my point... I will say you look darn good in jeans

All the best to you.
 Irish Eyez
Joined: 12/30/2008
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Posted: 2/19/2012 2:27:19 PM
Use proper sentence structure and paragraphs, apostrophes and capital letters at the beginning of each sentence ( also: personal pronoun I and I am etc., ) Too many ellipses within your profile. Use those suggestions and your writing will flow better and become much more legible and show you write well.
 bondiboy49
Joined: 3/15/2011
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Posted: 2/19/2012 8:57:07 PM
thanx for all that .. i have to say .. im not sure why i started using all the dots and stuff .. i guess its just quicker for me ............. but i take your points ...
 vrusimov
Joined: 5/24/2011
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Posted: 2/20/2012 2:17:32 AM
Being partial to ellipses myself, I have painfully realized that if overdone, the distraction dilutes the discourse so to speak. Sadly, I have to agree with previous observations and would suggest a rewrite with capitalization and punctuation in all the right places. Ellipses should be used sparingly in this type of "venue". Spell-check is your friend as well. Good luck to you.
 bondiboy49
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Posted: 2/20/2012 2:26:30 AM
maybe its just the rebel in me .. i dont mind a bit of linguistic anarchy ...lol... but thanx ..
 CalypsoRach
Joined: 12/27/2011
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Posted: 2/20/2012 9:59:05 AM
I see a good looking older guy who doesn't sell himself as much as he could.

He should look at his interests section and add a comma between them and add a few more. That way he can be searched for.

If only he knew on how much he could be.
 ladypenelope007
Joined: 1/15/2012
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Posted: 2/20/2012 1:09:12 PM
Iv read ur profile and it made me chuckle, and I agree with last poster there, you could sell yourself more (oh boy that didnt sound rite but u know wot i mean) lol. Only thing I would take away is the pic of you having a midlife crisis lol, the pic by the van is cool, you look like clint eastwood in that one
 bondiboy49
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Posted: 2/21/2012 1:44:51 AM
clint eastwood ...lol .. i should get a magnum !!!..maybe then someone can make my day !!?? lol ..thanx all !!
 bondiboy49
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Posted: 2/23/2012 12:04:20 PM
my midlife crisis pic stays !! .. lol
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