| | Could use some helpPage 1 of 1 | | Ive been on this site for a little while now and dont get many responses back, im not sure if its the messages i write or my profile. just need some feedback. I would like it best if females would give the feedback since that who im trying to talk to. | |
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| Could use some help Posted: 4/15/2012 4:25:19 PM | A lot of people tend to make this mistake. Your pictures are good, and so is the content of your text, the problem is, it's not structured. It's just a bunch of information jumbled into one paragraph, it's a little annoying to read.
Seperate your paragraphs, one about your likes, one about your wants and another about what you're looking for. | |
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| Could use some help Posted: 4/15/2012 4:38:19 PM | | I agree with CutTheCurtains. A little more information spread into paragraphs. I love that skydiving picture! | |
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