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 scoobywrx04
Joined: 6/17/2012
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ok girls need a girls point of view and what i can do to improve my profile. any help is good... and i mean anything dont hold back. go through with a fine tooth comb, but no need to point out grammer and spelling i already know i cant do eather.
 Irish Eyez
Joined: 12/30/2008
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wanted- ladys to review my profiel
Posted: 6/22/2012 7:08:14 PM
A primary pic should not involve caps, sunglasses, hats, etc., Women want to see your eyes.


but no need to point out grammer and spelling i already know i cant do eather

No excuse! You have MS Word or another similar programme. Run your profile through it and correct ALL spelling, grammar, etc., Women want to see that you've placed effort into your profile.

Women prefer legible sentences and paragraphs, not bullet point style profile.

The comments about boobs and ass, is tacky and not exactly mature. Remove it.
 clumsyjestr
Joined: 12/11/2011
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Posted: 6/23/2012 2:21:20 AM
Wow, yeah dude, for real. I know I'm not the lady you requested to review, but I just can't avoid saying it. Spelling errors alone are enough to send a lady off your page. Two pics in the same Subaru shirt ain't great but passable, although the tiny hand on yours in the second one is enough to make most women raise an eyebrow. And yes, the bullet-point style profile really isn't doing you any favors. EITHER. And a good place to start with the spelling and grammar... would be using it. Just try a little harder. As in actually finish typing one word before moving on to the next, and provide spaces between one finished word and the next. You know the first word in a sentence if supposed to be capitalized, you don't need spell-check to tell you that. And your first date makes it sound like you plan to be sitting there, wondering if this will work, which really sounds awkward.

Maybe pay a friend to help edit this for you? Ply them with beer?

First thing you have to do: Headline. Looking for a real women is wrong. Are you looking for women? Or are you looking for a woman? Note the spelling difference, it is important and this will be on the test later.

I'm not trying to be too brutal, but this is kind of what you were asking for. Except I'm not a woman. Good luck!
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