|A primary pic should not involve caps, sunglasses, hats, etc., Women want to see your eyes.|
but no need to point out grammer and spelling i already know i cant do eather
No excuse! You have MS Word or another similar programme. Run your profile through it and correct ALL spelling, grammar, etc., Women want to see that you've placed effort into your profile.
Women prefer legible sentences and paragraphs, not bullet point style profile.
The comments about boobs and ass, is tacky and not exactly mature. Remove it.