| | Some constructive criticism please? Profile ReviewPage 1 of 1 | I've been on this website for a few days & I've written to a handful of females but not getting any response from the girls I've been initially attracted to. A couple or so have viewed my profile but havn't said anything back & not sure if others have seen/read my message or even been online at all but I'd like some advice on anything I might be doing wrong? I actually want to build a really good & solid relationship this time because I've had enough of the casual sex, etc. or maybe it's just Karma teaching me a lesson? Or I'm ugly?
I generally go for really beautiful girls because I don't want to "settle" plus if I'm going to build a good & honest relationship I'd rather not lie about the beauty of my woman, understand where I'm coming from?
So read through my profile & pictures & come back with Some honest constructive criticism please, thanks.
I would really like a woman's opinion especially because those are the ones I want to attract. | |
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| Some constructive criticism please? Profile Review
Posted: 6/30/2012 5:23:14 AM | | man you have been on here for what like 3 days and not one single lady has messaged you?one thing you have to have is patience because you are a newbie here and takes a lot of time for women on here to take notice of your profile because they are scrolling through thousands of profiles trying to find the right one and frankly you are still a youngster compared to the many of other singles on here who have been here for years and still have no luck.now for the nitpicking...profile is pretty decent however you will have to make a major overhaul on your pics because the ones you have posted and not one of them shows you smiling.group photos do not work also,so take the hint.you have no car and before you say that's no big deal like many others i haven't given this very important detail to...it is a very big deal..you would be surprised that many women still like to date the old fashioned way where they can have the gentlemen pick up the lady and not the other way around..if all else fails,step away from the computer and go out and meet face to face because not all dating sites are a 100% guaranteed to find you a soul mate | |
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Posted: 6/30/2012 9:06:55 AM | Oh no, I've had "replies" but not from the ones I really want to hear from, but I have replied back still because I'm just nice & find it hard to ignore people.
I know I've made the "hey how are you doing" mistake with the ones I'm really attracted to(in terms of looks) which was early on. But i feel like At the end of the day, I don't think "how are you" is such a bad thing, if I wasn't interested in how a girl was doing I really wouldn't ask, I'm asking because I want to know. I don't know why women want to make this whole thing more complicated than it needs to be but what ever. It's funny, the ones I'm not very attracted to in terms of looks have the more interesting things to say on their profiles which I feed off & say something about in the message Or at least try to.
I know haven't been here long but I was hoping not to be here for long but I'll be more patient
I've updated my profile a bit to explain why I don't have pictures of me with a massive grin on my face but it's mainly because my smile makes me look weird lol
Car: well I can get one but it's going to drain money out of my pocket constantly & I'm not prepared for that, ladies. A car is a luxury I can't maintain.
Thanks for your advice, I will remove certain pictures & do my best to include smiling ones. & will be patient. | |
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Posted: 6/30/2012 9:27:59 AM | "I generally go for really beautiful girls..." You and 99% of the guys online. Consider your competition and the fact she won't have time to read your novel while sorting through dozens of emails a day. Beauty can be created, stupid is forever. Be careful about what you find 'beautiful'.
You can safely lose the rants about 'bad' intentions, messaging, and the retouched photos. If you can get it into one laptop screenview, it's more like to be read in its entirety. | |
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Posted: 7/1/2012 8:00:05 PM | I think it's way, way too long. I honestly would just delete everything after the fourth paragraph. You don't need any of it. You don't need to apologize for a conversation you haven't had yet and you don't need to tell girls to send a message to you (that's your job). Keep in mind that attractive girls get a ton of messages every week, how many are going to take the time to sift through that huge block of text?
Plus, I think a catchy or funny headline does better than what you have. | |
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| Some constructive criticism please? Profile Review
Posted: 7/3/2012 3:57:01 PM |
Loose the photos with the honeys!
they're just friends It doesn't matter who they are. There is an immediate subconscious psychological reaction when they see you with another woman. It is like you are cheating on them, and they haven't even met you yet. | |
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